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| ChristinaCharisma 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED THIS. Is there any way you'd write more Incredibles fic? I love Bob/Helen! |
| FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.... 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute. I like the explanation of the two halves in relation to each other. It made her character really, well, real. |
| Jakie Marie 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI love this story! It's very well done and is true to the characters. |
| marlee 2005-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseVERY CUTE!! I LOVED IT! HOPE YOU DO MORE LIKE THIS! SO CUTE! |
| marg 2005-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww this was a really cute story. and with the formerly, elastigirl story, it was a nice ending. |
| Sean Montgomery 2005-01-05 ch 1, | abuseMan, how do you do it? This was another wonderfully written story about... so many things! And they all tied together! The relationship between Bob and Helen wasn't... mushy, so to speak, but it was romantic in the practical sense - romantic without really being romantic, if that makes sense. Their worries, their thoughts (even the playful banter)... they all come out wonderfully written here. Once again, as with "Formerly, Elastigirl?", I'm very impressed. Great job! |
| levisrictusias 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseVery good! I read the companion piece to this and it was just as good. I commend you! Fabulous job! ~the flaming angel~ |
| yamathan 2004-12-25 ch 1, | abuseI got the giggles while I was reading this. You've done a lot for Helen in your other fanfiction, but this takes the cake. Bravo. You're good at characterisation. Stellar, even. Keep on doing that. Please. Because this really needs to be required reading for Incredibles fans. Seriously. Keep on truckin', and happy holidays. |
| phoenixredd 2004-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery well written story! You captured the characters to a definitive point! Keep writing, I will for sure be reading. I love Elastigirl, so keep it up! |
| dKiWi 2004-12-17 ch 1, | abuseYes, the Incredible's fandom needs more of these simply gorgeous Elastigirl studies as she is the least developed character in the movie. There is almost no hint about her identity crisis, its as if she forgot about her glory days. More people need to read this. NEED. |
| InsertWittyPenName 2004-12-16 ch 1, | abuseLove, love, LOVE it! This is great stuff, I hope you keep it up! |
| Pikashan61 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely amazing. Perfectly captured characters! If only there was more Incredibles fic like this... I can't wait to see more Incredibles stuff from you! |
| Quiet Infinity 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely wonderful! You've got Bob and Helen nailed down to a T. This couldn't have been more perfect. Their conversation was just so natural and fit right in their mouths. You've certainly got a talent with these two. Keep up the amazing work! |
| soccergurl1990 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Keep up the good work! |
| Vigilluminatus 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI suppose there will be no third part? No? Damnit! You are writing good! The film only shows the top of these feelings. Well done! But perhaps you should think of a third part... maybe Violet and Dash spying on their parents' date and talking about their own super-names? |