OMFG LMFAO... at every single chapter

Riku put his hand on Sora's shoulder. "Sit down Sora, and let me explain to you the power of TV advertisement."

(a few moments later)

"And that's how babys are made!" exclaimed Riku.

o good god... thats rich

"SHUT UP CLOUD!" Kairi said, kicking him where it hurts.

"Ow! My nose!" Cloud said with a dying breath.

OH DEAR GOD I PEED MYSELF!

I love it! I so want a "yaoi goes here" sign...

OKAY. . . . .THIS CHAPTER WAS. . . . DISURBING. . . . . . BUT YET FUNNY!

ME love your story
and it was funny too x)

HAHAHHA XD LOL that was funnyy
by the way...are you still dead?

You are a random ** chick, that's for sure.
But really. Really. Really funny. Seriously. I think my dad might put me in an asylum now.

Eh. Whatever. Quick Question: What ever happened to that 'Yes I believe in Santa' story?

I LIKE! *THUD* [This means I just fainted] *wakes up* HEY BERT! WHAZZUP?! *gets hit over the head by bert who is actually Riku in a bunny outfit* *THUD* *sora appears* "HI SORA!" I give him a hug *Riku sticks my foot in some hot fudge* "WOAH!" *THUD* "OH SORA! PLEASE KiSS ME!" Riku shouts. *Kairi appears* "NOT AS LONG AS I'M AROUND, SUCKERS!" [[QUOTE FROM LILI-CHAN]]*Kairi hits Riku with a few rocks and he dies* *Kairi kicks him under a sofa that has magically appeared*]] "Oh Kairi," *Sora kisses Kairi* "YOU CHEATED ON ME!" *Kairi punches Sora* *Sora go THUD* *I wake up* Well, UPDATE SOON!

ROFL! Thanks for sharing your randomnessnessness.

Hahahaha I could hardly stop myself from laughing short of duct tape! But of course, I woke up my mom and now she's all bossy ninja FBI karate woman on me (aka being a parent) so I'll read the rest in there morning.

nice... very nice. kinda weird... kairi was ver OOC for the whole thing (she dosen't usually kill people) hm could of used a moose though

Hell, you are RANDOM girl!

I love it.

But my all-time favourite part is:

"I'm Peter Pan! I'm a conceited **!"

-*is so using that as her MSN name*

Well, ciao!

~Talleh. HEH.~

And w00t. This is your eightieth review. You rock.

^^

OH NO!! IT'S THE END!?? this story rocked! well, thanks for the many laughs! and ya... cya!!
SOxKi4ev

Do u know what i just noticed. Everything that Kairi touches dies! Well not really she's just a serial killer.
Kairi: -takes out spoon- I am a cereal Killer!
Me: No not that cereal killer the other serial killer.
Kairi: There's another cereal killer? Who?
Me: -anime sweatdrop- You really are stupid
Kairi: CHOCLATE!
Me: what the oh forget u! Funny story i loved it!
Kairi: -pokes me with spoon- DIE!
Me: -breaks spoon- WILL U QUIT IT!