Hi. Well, i'm usually not one to use acronyms for regular words 9i appreciate good grammar, thank you for that, by the way), but what i'm about to say will probably be taken off the site if i actually type it, so: OMFG! Ok, honestly, though, OMFG!! This is probably the best story i have ever read on this site so far. I absolutely LOVE how you have the entire history (future?) planned out and you have someone going all andrew-ish with the camcorder. Awesome use of Spikes english dialogue and Angel and Spike fighting. Absolutely amazing. Of your storys that I've read, i love all of them. Increadible writing skills, I adore your work. Oh, and, please update "Progeny" soon? This is me begging on my knees again!

Completely Jealous
Larissa

Again kudos Lady Savage! What an origianl and compelling story! The characters are great and so funny and I am curious about where the love triangle (or is it a square?) is heading. Also am I sensing a developement between Xander and Derek? So here is my support for finishing the story, hopefully the next update is not too far off!

Whoo. I like this story! Its cool. possibly spuffy? please?

Cordelia latching onto Spike was right in character and Angel's reaction was hilarious. Spike's line about Angel seducing high school kids had me laughing out loud. Anna, Derek and Angie in high school should offer a lot of comedic possibilities.

Nice chapter here, Savage. Keep it coming.

Zeke

You know this one is totally my favorite of yours. I have laughed out loud many times reading it. Love the Buffy and Cordelia reactions. No matter how Spike and Angel feel, they are right on. Buffy is lusting after Angel and annoyed by Spike. Crodelia hits on the first salty goodness she meets. The fact that he saved her and was the center of attention for the evening being more the point than any interest she might have. Guess they forgot that they had relationships with the girls as young women and not the teenage kids they are meeting now.

Again Great job

still love the story :) update, soon!!

I absolutly enjoyed that last part. Keep it coming. It is Fabulous. You're a great writer.

Wonderful fifth chapter, although a little short for my liking :-) Hope you write another chapter really soon, I'll check back every other day or so!

I'm still in awe over how you gave the "new" character a distinctive voice, something that very few writers do!

I kinda like this - it's interesting to see Spike having to adjust to being human again. More interesting, though, is what Angel and Spike are going to do about these women in their life...

great chapter! this story is one of my favorites!

I loved Derek's blithe "He smokes" as an explanation why Spike is winded after taking a pounding. Buffy's reaction to Spike was priceless, too - jealous and attracted and in denial. Nice job with her skittering thought process.

Anna's observations that Angel's refusal to remove his shirt makes him a "poof" also made me laugh. Thanks for the heads up on "Living History." I'd never read it and really enjoyed it.

Lack of Spike/Buffy! O_O!

But muchly good otherwise :D

This chapter was great. And i loved Anna's journal entry. I also liked the fact that you made Spike realize his limits now that he is human.

I can't believe I wasn't reading this! I used to be, and now I am again :D I do heart it muchly ^_^ Yay for your good work :D