-takes deep breathe- I really really really really really a million times really like it. It's so so so so so so a million times so AWSOME! -gasps for air- I know that didnt make sense but it was and is awsome. One of the best fics I've read so far! I wonder how that would be like waking up to someone you like/love. Hehe
Well that was a mouthful. Heh.

Yes his name is Zabini. Not Zambini.

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glad thet you finally finished:P Very good story...lol

Aw Cute!

Cute story so far.

Well, thats it :)
I loved this story, I really did. You gave each character distinctive personalities, while never fully breaking them away from their origional characters. A good, rather unusual plot of (I assume) you're own creation ^_^ Nice. I enjoyed it.
The relationship honestly wasnt all that rushed. True..feelings were formed upon the third day. But they've been at Hogworts for HOW many years? :-D Plus, they werent forming a RELATIONSHIP until the middle of the story.
I enjoyed the pace you took them at, and I enjoyed each little conflict they brought.
Other than that..one chapter ._. where you broke away from your beautiful writing style, I completely adore this story :)
However..I admit this didnt feel like much of an ending for me. It was a cute idea, using the beginning dreams and whatnot for the very end. But overall, it doesnt feel like a closure.
Still, whats done is done ^_^ This story was done very well, and I cant wait to read more of your work.

Chapter 16: Ah-ha. Now things are starting to make sense ^_^ O. S'getting good!

19: Hmm..this is interesting. You know, I just sitting back earlier and thinking to myself 'Well, you know..its not that bad of a thing. I mean, at least you could always find them. Say, they go missing. You just sleep. Kidnapped..sleep.' And..now here comes this chapter xD Kidnapped. But! Curse cant help 'em now. Tis no curse. *insert sigh*
Eh? A note? We didn't see her writing any note. Actually..as soon as she even THOUGHT about voldermort and Lucius and figured this all out, she was captured. Perhaps rewind and give her more time? To actually write it,I mean. Consider it notes..lots of scribbles as she tried to piece together who would do it.
[Or, since we already know she’s at my house, why don’t I just lead you the quickest, easiest way?’ Draco drawled.] -- Wait a sec. How did they know she'd be at his house? Yes, they can assume Lucius had something to do with it due to her note..but it doesn't mean he'd take her to his house. He could take her anywhere.
..I noticed (lord, who WOULDNT) your random..weird notes throughout this chapter. Like..'Look a trail of obvious marks on the trees to follow' and 'obvious to the reader his heart was breaking' ...I guess it was kinda cute at first. But now, its just breaking away from the story, you know? Its too distracted, and pulls the reader away from feeling for the situation. ' I think it’s just there for the purposes of this story.’ ._. Its just too much, you know? A little is cute..and obviously allowed. Your the author. But as a reader, im just saying that I think its a bit too much. I cant find it humorous ._. It just takes away from the moment for me.
Gr... "or to be so OCC that he would start er- kissing" Nu! Stop it! You're completely changing your style of writing on me! ;-; I feel absolutely repulsed. Why are you suddenly throwing in all this garbage? You were doing great. If you hate this chapter so much you cant take it seriously, then change it...if you hate it, we're ganna hate it. And believe me. I officially HATE IT. This was one of your worst i've seen yet, and its a huge turnpoint for the plot. Isnt it? ;-; Please fix it...I really liked your story befor...I still do. And a parody is always fun..but that's not what your story was. You just switched styles in the middle of a story..at a huge area. It just doesn't work.. ._.

Chapter 5: Out of the first 14 chapters i've read so far, this is my absolute favorite ^_^ Its different, sweet, and provides cute comical relief. I'd say if you go back to this story and re-edit it, you mostly leave this specific area alone :) I've really enjoyed it.
From 'Catch cold and die' 'What board game?' to 'Im hungry' 'But wheres the food? We'll die!' ^_^ Heh..I love it. Very memorable. I wish you'd of let them recall such a fun moment, but such is life ;)

Chapter 8: Aw :) Least she spared him havin' to pet the Gnorkan. Does little Draco have a creature fear? I think so ;)
And that led us to chapter 9, and their sweet..but rather random comforting moment.
Him calling her a mudblood seemed a bit out of place and random to me. I assume hes doing it to insure hes not gone soft..but nothing really brought that upon them.
In order for it to fit better, perhaps you could have her somehow questioning his motives of following her and being nice. In responce, calling her a mudblood would be more logical..as hes trying to defend himself (or rather, avoiding certain things), and still obviously not heartfelt. Plus, that'd help with her little emotional breakdown. As i'm sure the last answer she'd expect upon wondering why hes following would be to be called a mudblood. Its a suggestion ^_^ Nothing more.

Chapter 11: Hmm..All pure-blood wizards have this trait...or is it that ONLY pure-blood wizards /can/ be cursed by this.

Chapter 14: Perhaps I dont fully understand this curse :-p Well..not perhaps. I really dont. But! I thought that the person would be driven to their soul-mate basically, and would wake beside/near them always. Not just..in their bed. Hermione wasn't even in her bed :-p She was with the other girls. So..why wouldn't he just end up on the floor wherever she was? Perhaps i'm mistaken, or maybe its just a plot error. Do clear it up, though? ^_^ Even just through response is fine.

Is this seriously finished? -because it feels like it's just cut off. Maybe it's the lack of the words "the end" or maybe it's the lack of a feeling or any words of finality, but... it had me wondering. good job on this, it was interesting.

hehe... well this ending was better than the other one you originally planned, i think, since it better concluded everything... i mean... i did wonder why Hermione was able to see Draco, too, if she wasn't a pureblood... well great story, i enjoyed reading it!

hmm... i seem to remember that when hermione fell asleep she landed into Blaise's lap... and Lucious said something about Hermione's soul mate surely not being Draco... or i'm guessing she landed on Blaise because he was sitting close to Draco and that Lucius assumed that Hermione would never like his son, hence his statement? yup... it must be the latter... well anyways, i just wanted to get that straightened out.

haha... well this parody isn't as irritating as those other ones where the author can't even write! anyways... yup, draco was OCC but i guess you covered it up by actually admitting it... lol.

... trying to pair up some interesting couples now, are we? this MUST be pre-HBP since Snape is known to be a half-blood... right? well anyways, excellent job!

u spoilt it all by making blaise and ginny go through the same thing. otherwise it's a rather neato story.

I loved it, it was funny, romantic(kindof)and a wonderful
story.