I think that was seriously the most incredible fanfic I've ever read. I loved it, I loved the Jack/Nina interaction. The last sentence is just haunting.

I really enjoyed it. Great fic. You write Nina so well. I actually read the prequel to this first, and I couldn't stop reading it so when I was finished I had to come and read this one too. I don't think I've ever read anything so quickly, I just couldn't stop, lol. Please write a sequel, I really wanna know what happens next!

have i read and reviewed this before? I don't know - but I do know that i loved reading it tonight - great job!

Hej! What can I say? I think you hit the nail right on the head. Very well written, very good characterization of all the characters and a storyline much better than the original one (at least in my opinion :-)

Now you've promised us a sequel... well, I don't know about the others but I'm still waiting... :-)

Such an amazing fic and all I can really say is that I LOVE it! :D I love how your Nina has someone who loves her and looks after her... Great conclusion with Jack realising it's better like this! Thanks for writing these wonderful fics about Nina!

This story was a hell of a lot better than what we were presented in Season 3. Thanks for writing it.

"And not even caring if he could see it or not, she broke into a smile. A surrendering, sarcastic smile. She should have known. It was just too good to be true." That was just *perfect*, and there were so many other lines like that. Nina is a hard character is write - I know, I tried - but you caught her perfectly. Thanks for not making her a redeemed sinner or the devil incarnate in this story. I love how you describe her raw survival instincts, how badly she does not want to die, as opposed to Jack who always seemed like he never wants to live, yet they both caught up in the thrill. You made Jack interesting in fanfic to me, which is no mean feat. I could really feel the chemistry and tension between them and their willing to hurt and turn on each other. I love that he shot her hand, but was still unable to kill her, and not just because he needed her alive for information.

I love your dialogue. It's so sharp, with bits of dry wit that I've come to expect from "24" (Chapelle! You have Chapelle alive and well :D:D) It feels like it could have been part of the show, and I really wished it had. Characterization of all the characters is dead-on, including Michelle's, which makes the Michelle!** me happy, and glad to find someone else who thought Mason always did have the hots for Nina ;)

Excellent conclusion to a wonderful story! You really did throw me for a loop there in the last chapter! Enjoyed how you left Jack with some morals and all!!

Congratulations on writing such an awesome story!

That's just mean to leave me hanging there!! You have to update soon! I need your story!

>I'm constantly amazed at the amount of psychology you've included, it must have taken you awhile to get an idea of what they would feel given the scenario you would put them in<

Actually the major part just comes to me while I'm writing. I mean, there's an idea in the beginning and a plan where I wanna go but - the rest I'm basically just making up on the way. I tend to feel a bit schizophrenic though, the closer I get to the end, all these characters in my head...

>I won't hold a grudge<
LOL Good thinking! Don't blame her for the one thing she's got nothing to do with.

This story is so amazing! I love all the twists and turns and it's just as exciting as the show itself! Actually it's better since it's got more Nina! Loved the latest chapter! Your Amador is great and I love resourceful Nina using a pen! And all the mindgames are great!
>...if it hadn't been for Nina, Kate would have died that day. It's not like she did it on purpose, he objected>
LOL Well, yeah she didn't do it on purpose so I won't hold a grudge! ;)

I'm starting to wonder if you are going to take this back to the way season three where Amador was working for the other guy and there were more vials...
By the way, I love how they are each trying to play each other... and now leaving us with the cliffhanger with what Danny is going to do...

Nina with the traces of a conscience?? WOW!!

another great set of chapters... I'm constantly amazed at the amount of psychology you've included, it must have taken you awhile to get an idea of what they would feel given the scenario you would put them in!! Well done!!