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| Q42 2006-01-18 ch 6,  | abuseBeautiful job! The plot is complex, your writing is fantastic, and the story is a joy to read. I'm adding this story to my Favorites and looking forward to Chapter 7. |
| tatsu.zzmage @gmail.com 2005-12-14 ch 6, anon. | abusedamn thats sad, you got discouraged on this? either way i loved your ideas for the thirds build/designs |
| tatsu 2005-12-14 ch 3, anon. | abuselove the bi-play between syl and armatage |
| tatsu 2005-12-14 ch 2, anon. | abusethis is one nasty au so far, you did a great job writing it wish it had gotten a better reception |
| tatsu.zzmage @gmail.com 2005-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abusei cant believe you've only got 8 reviews for this i mean hell the prologue is great, cant wait to get to more of the story. |
| J.S 2005-12-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseMORE! Dude, what happened to the story? Please write more. (Repeat x 100 0 0) |
| J.S 2005-12-03 ch 5, anon. | abuseI like! Once again, great work! |
| J.S 2005-12-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseIt's very nice so far. Really good and interesting. |
| J.S 2005-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! MORE! I like! I love fanfics, mainly because I spent so much personal time inventing my own. Then I came across other fanfics. Great stuff. But yours ... I have no knowledge of the series/movie/manga you have based your work on, but I like! MORE! |
| Josh 2005-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. Has that gritty feel that a good cop series should have. The investigative side of the story is well plotted and ais enjoyable to read. Your characterizations seem spot on as well, thought its been a while since I saw Armitage. Sorry for not reviewing sooner, but you dropped off the map again. This site has a good board for space related fiction, , they would love your Trek and Macross fiction and seem to give good commintary. |
| Arthur Hansen 2004-12-24 ch 3, | abuseThere is a lot of jumping around in this chapter. It doesn't focus too well and it was easy to get lost. There are a lot of good ideas, but the introduction was a bit muddled to me. I like the even grittier version of Mars, but it jumped around too much and there may be too many character/elements being told about. |
| Arthur Hansen 2004-12-13 ch 2, | abuseMuch better, as a chapter. I'm not really sure what's up with this. It's AU, obviously, but it seems more to make it grittier for some reason. |
| Arthur Hansen 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI'm having a hard time connecting to this story so far. No Armitage or the Cop from Earth. Without Armitage I, it just doesn't seem like the right start. |