 X-titan 2005-09-26 . chapter 3Dude.. 5 reviews don't do it justice... this story is just amazing... its like going it to the characters pov, like actually being there, in their shoes, seeing this happen, thinking about that and so on. It's like you hit their personalitys right on, enough not to make it look corny but not so occ to be like "Yeah whatever, like thats ever gonna happen." This is just awesome.
PLEASE UPDATE!! 0.0 I beg of you! >< I'll give you a cookie. =D |
 PPM's Official Fan Girl 2005-05-27 . chapter 3There is nothing wrong with this story, and the reason for that is because you are the most amazing writer on That is no exaggeration, not one BBT story has ever moved me enough to cry yet, but this one did. Anyone at all who read this but didn't review should be punished by the gods for their insolence, I do believe that you could be a published writer someday, and if you do ever become that of which I pray that you do, be sure to tell me by the means of email to- terra_156@ .
I really do hope that you will write a sequel this is just too good not to! The way your words flowed was like music, I'm actually afraid that my keyboard might be ruined from all the tears I've cried! As I said before, it would be a crime for the whole world not to be able to read things like this, which is why I'm writing such a long review in hopes that you will continue writing and never give up on your dreams.
Also, just because I'm a person who can't do a review without doing this- PLEASE CONTINUE IF YOU DON'T I SHALL HUNT YOU DOWN, RIP OUT YOUR BELLYBUTTON AND STRANGLE YOU WITH IT! WRITE A SEQUAL FOR THE SAKE OF MY SANITY! There now there's that, I hope that just because of those last five lines that this doesn't sound too mushy.
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