great! i love donkey kong!

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This is great stuff! I loved the little tidbits of 80's culture, like Luigi's love of "The Cosby Show" and your incorporation of the sarcastic humor of the old-school Super Mario Bros. cartoons. I know this is an old story of yours, but it would be wonderful to see your take on some of the Marios' other adventures!

Very interesting read! At first This story seemed like TMB movie, but I see how it all works together. You don't even have to use DK's name to see how it works. Brillient.

Who ARE you? Meandering around a place like this...

Amazing. How a person can get a VCR into a toilet in the first place...

I would grovel, but I'm sore. Live with it.

I WILL be attacking you later if you don't continue this. Damn good.

I love it.

Very well done. Extremely. Congratulations on a fic well written! Very interesting plot, surely you'll come up with something equally as suprisingly original in the next fic?

Interested? Very! Write more!

haha that was sweet! keep up the stories that was a great take on the classic donkey kong :)

cool story. it ties in with the first donkey kong game, right? that REALLY old one that used to be an arcade game, and i can't seem to beat it on my game?

I liked this. Especailly since it was told from Luigi's point of view. Plese continue, I wanna know why Mario captured Donkey Kong(plotline of Donkey Kong II) and why he and Luigi had to clean out those pipes(plotline of Mario Bros, the orginial game that first introduced Luigi).