lol Peter's maze.. that would be an interesting sight. Love the story.

great ending, but i wanted to see how everyone reacted to harry's will... it would have been funny, nonetheless it was an interesting read. :)

good story, good ending, good characters...
thankfully, your descriptions are way better than mine, and i think they were part of what made this story such a nice read.

and everything made sense! aside from some interesting coincidences, but hey, it's fiction, and there's a crazy amount of those in real life anyway.

i loved harry's slight randomness, expecially with the quotes and proverbs- it was fun trying to place them or figure them out. same with some of the conversations between harry and tom, although they weren't straightforward you could get all the meanings pretty quickly, and it wasn't simply handed to you- you actually had the chance to think!

8.5/10.

oh, and thanks for putting the info about the title, it really fits the story quite well.

what? no!
stupid hermione... she's being such an idiot...but it's kinda refreshing, the brilliant mind missing the obvious.

sorry, saving my full review for the end, but that one line at the end of this chapter...ack! the blind twit needs to open her eyes...

great story so far, and all the little quotes and other quirks give it another level that's nice.

Yay he died in the end I'm so happy *sniff* Too bad we didn't get to see more Haze and Ash. I had hoped we would. oh well. It was a great story. Thanks for posting it.

This is one of the most AMAZING stories I have ever read. It had everything I was looking for. It had action, romance, fluff (hehe fluff), and it had two of my favorite Harry Potter characters together. I think you did a fantastic job with writing this. The plot and language was very intelligent, and you actually taught me a few new vocab words that I hadn't known previously. Thanks so much for writing something so awesome. I wish you would do a sequel, though I have no idea what it would be about. But I just wanted to review and express my thanks for being a great author and writing a great story.

wow... absolutely bloody brilliant! It was really enjoyable and somewhat refreshing. -grins-

I really like your eloquence in your writing. It seems to slip into my mind as i read. And its smooth too, no action predictable but somewhat in character for them although oocness is expected. :D
Keep on writing!

I have been holding out on writing my opinion on your story for quite some time now, waiting to see if it would go up or down hill in a manner of speaking. I have decided that you are possibly the best writer on this site. I love the way you elaborate on their thoughts and philosophies because it adds to the characters persona and helps me to visualize what it would be like to talk to them in real life. I also admire the way you write your little erotic moments. You do not give too much information and leave a definite amount of room for the readers imagination to play its own part in the story. Not to mention the fact that you do not use the typical clique words such as "member" and other strange phalic terms that this world has come up with. One last thing, I absolutely love the way you incorperate your own thoughts into the story and also how you leave reference material for the reader to look into. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for writing this story.

This is such a great story. It's one of my favorite Tom/Harry fanfictions. I love how sane and yet insane Tom is in this story. I mean one minute he's fine and the next he's going into a homicidal rage! Lol. Poor Eilean!(spelling?) I hope everything worked out all right with her. I love how Ron was a true friend in this also. So many fanfictions depict him as the bad guy. What was the problem with Hermione though? Was she just Harry's friend for his name in this one? Ah well, all in all a great story. Won't be surprised if I decide to read it again.

Angelwarrior1

wow... wonderful story!! I really enjoyed it! =)

Absolutely fan-fricken-tasktic! I could not stop reading until i had finished. You are simply AMAZING! And the fact that you are a Final-fantasy aficionado, like myself, only added to my happiness.

You are now considered one of my favorite authors and I will be reading the rest of your work. DO expect to hear from me again regarding these stories.

Once again, fantastic. The characters were believable, all of them, the situations where conceivable. I especially liked that Ron was the supportive one, which is something not normally seen in stories such as this.

Thank you for writing.

~Sophia Max-Anderson

I loved this story. It was very good. I am glad that I finally finished it, though...as I am really very tired and my migraine is at full steam.

That last scene was awesome...one more to go...and then sleep...

Wonderful chapter. I'm dead tired, have a migraine, and really want to go to sleep...but on the other hand, I'm almost finished with this, and really don't want to keep putting it off...in fact, this has taken me longer to read than almost anything else...but that might be because of my penchant for losing track of what I am doing and starting something else. Darn ADHD...