Absolutely excellent, I really enjoyed this, thank you!

this is a perfect tribute to murphys law.. I feel for both of them... gladly Numair comes to his senses

Wonderful!

True to the characters, hilarious yet sweet to boot, and excellent writing, this is what every good fanfic should be. Well done, well done

Hilarious. And sweet. And all that is good, :)

This was funny and sweet :)

Awesome :D Cute and a little bit funny too. Feel a bit sorry for Dawkins though. Hehe

love this! and i love her staring "mutinously."

GREAt word.

it really is a masterful story though, no pun intented.

this needs to be under comedy. my sides hurt from laughing too much.

I had the "luck" of drinking soda while reading this. ^^ Needless to say, I didn't do much drinking 'coz I was laughing too much XD

I loved it

Great job. I really enjoyed it. Very funny.

LOL I love the part where Alanna confronts Numair and then lies "without shame". Oh yeah, and the Carthaki execution song was hilarious too.
Nicely done!

Brilliant! I couldn't stop laughing, especially about the Carthaki execution song xD

I freaking love this story!

I loved this! Very good and Daine and Numair just rock!

Excellent. I can so picture Zek doing that! *laughs extremely hard* Great story.