Sweet, I would have liked a little more max an logan action thoug. hehehheheheheheh Mindy M.

ROFLMAO. Very cute story. I can remember camping in the living room too :)

LOL! You suckered me good on that one! Here I was expecting a makeout scene and...nothin'. Hee! Next time I'll pay more attention to the actual text of your A/N and not the parts in parentheses. ;)

These S'mores need further study. I've never had them. Got the camping and the wilderness stuff down, but not the S'mores... Great story!

Very sweet! Does it count as no 'shipper though? I saw a little hug in there somewhere!

LOL - Loved the author's notes! Okay - this one passed all requirements, but I'm a little concerned about what goes on after 'lights out' lol. My final opinion - very nicely done!! You've restrained yourself admirably!

ooh sneaky sneaky, but i'll let it slide since the story was so good. looking forward to more so keep up the great work!

You can't fool me! This is such a nice image:

"Her pleasure at something so simple warmed his heart, and he transferred from his chair to join her on the floor. She was opening the containers and peering inside, sampling the picnic with relish. Her joy was childlike, pure and innocent.

...that we KNOW what's coming, even no shipping at the moment! Thanks for all the alternate takes on the challenge.