Its a very sweet story.
I enjoyed it a lot.
Thank you for sharing it.

Ah so funny, sides hurt, ow. And cute, so very cute, did I mention how damn cute this fic is? You may have just hooked me to Havoc/Fury. Yeowch.

Anyways, loved the fic! Cheered me right up!

Maiko

Aw, it's over already? It only took me an hour to read it... XD

It was a lovely story! Multi-pairing stories should be done more often! XD.

...Does saying that make me a hypocrite? XD

That was so adorable. I can just imagine Ed- jogging along the beach, and Roy huffing and puffing and RUNNING right behind him. XD

The FueryxHavoc was good, too! Havoc knows when not to leave!

OH I'm loving this story more and more with each chapter!! You're awesome!

POOR AL!! XD "You are so lucky my grandmother is watching us."

It's a good thing Pinako trusts Al!!

Uh-OH... Nurse Havoc! XD, just kidding.

He instead achieved a state of contented irritation with the world in general.

I LOVED that line! It's such a great thought! So poetic, and yet so accurate in describing Ed! XD

And the CRAB!! XD, the crab scene was AWESOME!

Hahaha. It's kind of funny, though. Breda got stung and he's fine, and now Fuery did and he fainted, the poor thing! But he was very brave to just stand stock-still and let it attack him. Pfft.

I'm not making fun of Fuery, really! I like him! I just think this chapter is funny, where he's concerned.

Hehehe. Time to watch Roy make his move?? That would make for a good next chapter.

I love this so far! Riza's awesome, Ed is superb, Alphonse is hysterically amusing, and Roy is... well. The Colonel. All is as it should be. XD

that was really good, i hope you carry on writing :):):)

That must have been embarrassing for Al ^.^

Something different, I may say...I really like your style of writing, very simple but perfect.
I'm really liking this fanfic and especialy since it's about RoyxEd ^^ love it!

Hm... I'll just point this out rather idly... an anemone doesn't have enough minerals in it to turn into a dagger... not to mention Ed's got this thing against transmuting living things... not that it's really important to your story.

Hah well I love your writing style, and you wrote Ed and Roy perfectly..Hawkeye too ^^ I cant comment on Fury and Havoc cause I've not seen them much but im sure you wrote them great too. You need to write more multi-chaptered FMA fics. yep.

This was so cute ^^