beautiful

SO CUTE! I BELIEVE IN NARUTO TOO! CHA!

It's really good

I LUVED IT! naruto totally deserves to have his dream come true. the whole fic kinda reminded me of someone flashing back. is that how u ment ti to sound, or did it just turn out that way? (either way it was great) ^.^

Oh my god. Oh my god. This story is so great. It cause me to cry. I love it.

this was pretty good. I am really liking it. Love the lyrics, too.

Nice! The lyrics and the fic are well matched! I'm looking forward to your other fics you will write... Good Job!

hey i finally read ur fan fiction. its my first 1 out of ur list n its really good! I kinda like the refreshing of the stories from Naruto point of view evem of its just repetition! Cause it provides a lot of deep and heartfelt feelings that anime leaves u to infer. However, i thought that u cld elaborate more on Naruto and Hinata getting together.. it seems too short! and the ending too abrupt! Haha i really like it as a whole and believe me cuz i'm suppose to be studying but i got glued to ur story! heh heh. Take care n i'll read more of your fanfiction after my stupid a's k! cyaz ard!

I doubt that there is anyone on the planet that thinks that Naruto will fail with his dream... he will become the greatest hokage ever... thats a law of nature.

Fic rating: 7/10. Althought a little... well... foggy in the end... I think it was great. HELL YEAH!!

Not bad, liked the NaruhIna bit in this fic, though I must admit this is a well written portrayal for Naruto. Nice job.
PS: Have you seen the Naruto movie yet,and if you have are you going to have any of the characters from it show up in Coming Home? Just curious.
PPS: Here's a little omake that's my attempt to bring Sasuke back from 'the dark side' (sorry too much Star Wars). Minor crossover that takes place during Naruto and Sasuke's fight:

Just as Naruto and Sasuke were preparing to begin their fight, a loud and booming voice spoke out.

Mysterious Voice: STOP THIS BATTLE AT ONCE!! True friends, true comrades should not be fighting one another!

Both Naruto and Sasuke turn to see a tall and muscular looking bald man with a mustache standing behind them.

Mysterious Man: Allow me to introduce myself, I am Alex Louis Armstrong, a State Alchemist assigned to aid Konoha by the fuhrer. (pauses and looks closely at both Naruto and Sasuke) I have been given information about the two of you from your sensei ninja Kakashi as well as your third teammate Sakura Haruno and I must say...
I will not allow such a sacred bond between friends to be destroyed!! What has been damaged can be repaired, just like destruction and creation are the two opposite sides of alchemy!!

Armstrong then turns to Naruto.

Armstrong: Fear not Naruto Uzumaki, I, Alex Louis Armstrong, the Strong Armed Alchemist, will use all the gifts that have been passed through the Armstrong family to make your friend see his errors!!

Armstrong suddenly ripps his shirt off and begins to pose, pink sparkles appearing around him, and he stands right in front of Sasuke as he does this.

Armstrong: Look at these muscles, Sasuke Uchiha! Each of them has been the pride of the Armstrong family for generations, and right now, every fiber from this body is screaming in pain from all of your friends' plight!! Touch them, and feel their pain, and in doing so see the light!

Now Armstrong was practically looming over Sasuke, their faces inches apart, while Naruto sweatdropped slowly edged away from the weirdo, while Sasuke was shocked speechless (much Naruto).

Armstrong (moves closer to Sasuke): TOUCH MY MUSCLES, Sasuke Uchiha!!

Sasuke (eyes widened in complete terror) did the only thing he could do. He screamed and ran away, unfortunately in his fright forgetting he had gotten turned around and was running 'back' to Konoha village instead of to whereever Orochimaru was.

Hours Later: Tsunade's Office:

Shizune: Tsunade-sama, we have recovered Nara Shikamaru's team members, and all those injured are recieving prompt medical attention and should be alright soon. Also Sasuka Uchiha has been returned to Konoha village. Mission success.

Tsunade: Good, now I'd like a report on the condition of each team member followed by a report on Sasuke's condition.

Shizune (seatdrops): Um...actually that may take some time. Sasuke is back in the village, but...

Tsunade: But what?

Shizune: Well...you remember that state alchemist sent to aid Shikamaru's team? Well...

As Tsunade was given the details, Sasuke Uchiha could be seen running around Konoha village, with a bald half-naked bodybuilder screaming for him to "touch them" on his tail.

Heh, sorry if that was pretty silly. Anyway, please update Coming Home soon..

I loved it =) Good job!

I love this!
it's so cute!
very well written and well planed

^_^ nice one shot. i like your one shots, you have a unique flair to it. look forward to more of them.

that was awesome

I like the mix of your ideas of Naruto's childhood and mentality then with a excellent summary of his actions and mind through out whats been released thus far.

thank you for posting this

nice story Chibi..
throughout the story, you had a nice vantage point on Naruto's perspective. the points from the series were well timed.

my only problem lies in the end.. it seems too forced for Naruto to come back in love with Hinata (as great as that would be..), and for Naruto's team to be able to beat a Sennin at the age of 15?? as strong as Naruto is, he's a long way off from beating a Sennin especially since Orochimaru isn't really affected by aging since he gets a new body every 5 years...

anyhow.. good story.. keep up your writing, youve got a good style to it..