Reviews for To Tell Is To See

Reviews For: To Tell Is To See

tricksters_queen15 2005-07-13 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is stupid. really, i'm not even saying it to be mean but this is stupid. how can you write a "chapter" that has NOconnection to the story your writing a ff about? its to feaking "paragraphs"fo god's sake! and by the way, paragraphs usually have at least 5 sentences.
Velocity9 2005-02-16 ch 1,	abuseHi...You reviewed my story, 'The Lone Ranger Vs Dracula'. Thanks for the unfortunately breif but positive comments! You short poem(et?) was interesting. It reminded me of that 'Ren & Stimpy' episode where the were wrestlers fighting these 2 behemoths. I remember at least SOMEBODY in the match was called 'Killer Kadugan'. Anyway, At one point, A commentator ask one of the a giant('Bad')guys his thought on the fight. He raved on about revenge and knowing were his opponants(Ren & Stimpy) lived. Then it was Ren's turn, But Stimpy exitedly swiped the mic and said, "I wanna say the funny words..." The next few sentances were total nonsence, but were no less entertaining. Your poem kinda reminded me of the above, but it was somehow poinient at the same time. I'm not sure what kind of writing style you're shooting for, but I style grew from reading Goerge Lucas' Star Wars(Ep-4) novel, the 'Star Rigger' trilogy by John DeChancie of 'Castle Perilous' fame, and various comic bok writers First-Person/'self' narratives. Hope that helps! P.S. Plz read my other stories and look for the up-coming 'Predator vs The Creature from the Black Lagoon' and another story, a take on the Origins of the Megadues robots from the anime, 'Big O'(on Cartoon Network at night. and yes, that's REALLY the title!) By the way, for those who won't read my first two entries of 'Godzilla Vs Predators: Alien Damnation!', I wrote them when I didn't know how to use WORD-pad, and I promice the next chapters will be relatively small and around twenty. All my other stories I'm keeping the size of my single chapter 'The Lone Ranger Vs Dracula'. Again Ego-gal, yours was an odd but cute story and not bad.
To first reviewer 2004-12-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseit was meant to be stupid! DUH! It even says that the main points are in the first paragraph! READ the first paragraph! It's saying, "TELL ME WHAT TO WRITE! THIS SITE WON'T LET ME KEEP JUST THIS FIRST PARAGRAPH UP, SO I WROTE IN IN STUPID SOTRY FORMAT! PLEASE, GIVE ME IDEAS! I'LL WRITE ANYTHING YOU WANT ME TO! ANYTHING AT ALL!" Are you REALLY THAT clueless, that you didn't get that? And please, if you can't say something nice (or give any ideas), then DON'T SAY ANYTHING AT ALL!
REVIEWER 2004-12-17 ch 1, anon.	abusewow! this is seriously one of the most stupid things i've ever read on this website! stop typing/writing now!

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