Wow, that was really good, and so funny! The part about the garbage bag was creative too! Keep thinking insanely!

OOH! I can't wait for when they play DDR!

i so love the way you do me like that.i think you should do the beaver song:
Beaver 1,beaver all,
let's all do the beaver song!
(make beaver noises)
Beaver 2,beaver 3,
let's all climb the beaver tree!
(make beaver noises)
Beaver 4,beaver 5,
let's all do the beaver jive!
(make beaver noises)
Beaver 6,beaver 7,
let's fly up to beaver heaven!
(make beaver noises)
Beaver 8,beaver 9,
STOP!it's beaverin' time!
(make beaver noises)
emily learned that song at jesus camp and taught it to me!! it's hilarious!
i love you!
(you're gonna have to 'do me like that' soon!!)
kisses!
Kitty-Chan

0.0 ...Oro. 0.0

you finally updated-yay!i love the title of this chappie-heheh.it's a landslide-lol.that's right-Soujiro loves me-hurray! i think this chappie was nice and funny.i laughed.i cried.oh wait,i didn't cry.silly kitty.i went to media play today and the 15th kenshin wasn't there! i was so mad.*pouts* i think i should sing 'i wanna lick you from your head to yours toes..' or whatever that song is called.i should so do a parody of that song with Sou-Chan! that would be wicked!lol.another great chappie,update when you can!! (ONLY 7 MORE SCHOOL DAYS LEFT-WOO-HOO!)
Love,
XOXO,
Kitty-Chan

^_^

Aw! Awesome! sorry i never get a chance to review, but i'm here now! excellent, as always! erm...not sure what else to point out...oh yeah,i woudn't be able to bowl to save a poor old lady's life! just tought you might wanna know. i'd probably score a -9 to be truthfull, and break a few bonesin the process!

salad!
~digiko

I WOULD NEVER HAVE A MY WAY WITH SANO-THAT'S JUST WRONG! i would have my way with Kenshin,Aoshi,or Soujiro(in which would involve in some way,shape,or form-Play-Doh).Ahh-my little green ball!i went bowling like 2 weeks after you went with me,and i found it! didn't i name that ball Barney or something? like it's the big-green-bowling-ball-dinosaur-machine? i think it was that. and i didn't win the games i played that time because 'Barney'(yes,let's call him 'Barney' for now),didn't have your ball to rub against for good luck! my ball misses your ball when i go bowling without you!!*cries*-we have to go bowling together again sometime,with Cowie,too.are balls(ha-ha) have to be reunited once more! ha-ha. racks.balls.it's all good!i miss you a lot! see you tomorrow in school!
Love,
XOXO,
Kitty-Chan
-(this is me)
-(this is you)
-(and this is Cowie!)

^_^ Yay! An update!

Kitty and Soujiro? Ok...Sorry I didn't get a chance to review till now, btw. Not my fault!

I love your story so much!Sorry about those wierd people reviewing you those stupid reviews, word of wisdom... just forget it happend, even though I wouldn't I would solve the problem myself! Just remember you have people who love your story so... KEEP WRITING! I'm serius! Keep writing! See ya soon
Aku-Naraku

Georgina Ferret and Lowlianne Blahstonblah & Wacked and Guess Again Lamo-this is for you-since you're clearly the same person... You flame this story and yet you read all 8 of the chapters. You flame this story so harsly and yet you're too afraid to keep your heads up high and leave your actual name.What?Are you too afraid that we will go to your stories and write trash about them as well?Or are you not a writer on this site at all and just get kicks out of making people unhappy with pieces of writing that they've worked hard on? And next time you flame someone,why don't you give them suggestions on what they could do to make it better instead of so bluntly saying that 'they need to get out of the house'? Or have you not noticed that they WERE actually getting out of the house to go bowling?And next time you write two flames for the same story,try not to end them both with 'yours truely' and crappy names,eh?Because that might make it harder for people to hate your guts.
With much love and warm wishes,
AkApUnKyD,
(or Kitty-Chan)
;)

This story needs more excitment... more adventure instead of being in your house and being blubbering idiots, stupid mortal! I agree with the unknown person... you suck!
Your truely,
Georgina Ferret and Lowlianne Blahstonblah

Wow my cat can write better then you and he's blind and dead. This story is soo gay that I feel as though I'm turning gay. This Riku person... what is she gay? And you say your a girl, but are you really? Kitsune... what is he a drug addict or something? You are lame... lame, lame, lame!
Yours truely,
Wacked and Guess again lamo

you suck