PEVERT YOU ARE A SICK AND TWISTED LOSER YOU SHOULD NEVER DO THAT TO YUGI!

i like it and i hope that you will updatae it because i want to see the demonic angel

Sometimes, it really is TRUELY disturbing to think what the hell is going on in that head of Luff's...She's normally so quiet at school, you wouldn't beleive that secretly she's an ABSOLUTE PERVERT!
Heh, heh, perhaps her nickname should be Shigure...)
But, I guess I can't complain, as the slightly demented thought process did make a good chapter.
HEY! Next time why don't you let someone else write something for you! (*Cough!* HINT! HINT! *Cough!*)
Til next time
-Lia (AKA That weirdo with new purple streaks in her hair.)

Yugi,

Well um... this chapter was good no doubt,... but, it was very difficult to read. Luff, I have to say your quite talented in this area of writting, and Yugi, your ideas in this chapter are interesting. Well keep posting. Yugi, I'm glad to hear that your updating again. I Look forward to your next chap!
Always PeaceSeeker

YOU LAZY **!! I can't believe you couldn't be bothered to add anything? And how long ago was it when I actually wrote that for you? Um, last friday I think...but hey. But now me and Chen are finally back from our 'holiday'. -_-zZ You get the idea. But I don't think it's going to take very long for your story to be taken down...sorry. ^-^

S. Chensu: Hello darling, this is Chen... 0_0 Very disturbed by what my dear sweet innocent little flower Luff is capable of writing... Sorry there, the Fruits Basket was forcing its way through into my brain... And I agree with Luff on all accounts, you are lazy and this could be the chapter that gets you reported. But nevermind eh...? Am tired due to spending several hours on the road with bad music blaring over my brilliant Scissor Sisters and making me go deaf. On another note, what is the song you did lyrics for at the end? I don't think it's Scissor Sisters and after listening to the whole album on repeat four/five times I should know. Unless it is? I'm very confused now...

Luff: No it's not Scissor Sisters! I think it's on my Annual 2005...but oh well. But this has nothing to do with your chapter. In fact it's all me! (Well my writing!) Anyway I have to have a shower now so this is goodbye from me. As always keep writing your story, and I'll see you on Monday at school! (Why oh why does it exist?)

S. Chensu and Luff x.

Uhh...disturbing a bit, perhaps not so much as Keith and what was it again? Ah, who cares. *shrugs* Nice job, your friend did on the NCS. Poor Yugi. Can't wait to read more on the happenings of the plot. write more soon. See ya. ^_~

...woah...that was really good. i can't wait for the next chapter!

whoa!your friend did good! it was well good! poor yugi... wen is yami goin to ** to help him?

Hello sister, it is I, your sister. Um, tell luff this was SO cool! GO DARTZ! RAPE THE THINGY! Ahem, yugi. I love angsty,rapey,stuffy! It is cool... To all you out there! I'm using this review as advertising for MY stories. Please check them out, just click on 'yugi and mai',scroll down, and wholla! Click on any of my stories. 'Seeing thru u',or 'yamis of torture'. *wink* And don't forget to leave a review! *wink* PLEASE?
Ahem, hi yugi.Bye yugi.Update yugi.

X~Mai Valkov~X

*eye twitches* I don't feel so well know.. it was well written but...*turns to her trusty bucket*...the pairing for the lemon couldn't have been worse..*remembers Rafaiel and Keith* or maybe it could of. Please update again soon..*continues to twitch*

Hi its me again! Sorry for not reviewing earlier and saying thank you for the advice you gave me! Thanks to your sister as well. I like how this story is going so far, although Dartz is evil. I would like it very much if you killed him off later. Will Yugi and Yami get together? Just a question I thought I'd ask. Could you also kill off Keith too? I hate him to hell, locking the gang in a cave and almost killing Yugi in a fire. jerk. Bye!

Yugi,
I read your first chap and second, and I have to say that your story thus far is pretty good. Poor dear Yugi!! And that Dartz! He's gonna get whats coming to him I'm sure of it! He's EVIL! But anyway, I think I enjoyed the second chap better than the first. At first I thought the king was going to be Yami, but I can see that I was wrong. However you had me by surprise when I learned it was Dartz! Well here is your bucket; :hands bucket to Yugi: You, as well as many of us will need it for up coming chapters! Update soon!

ugh! the stupis system wont log me on! but hey ur story is kool!! please i dont want yugi to be hurt! i hope yami saves him!

I think Yugi's uncle is Pegasus. I could be wrong. And I like the tail thing. I've ready stories where the characters get wings and such but they are treated like an accesory. To have the tail wag, shiver, clutch, etc. is a different take. Well done. And I can't wait to see Yami. If Yugi is this sweet then Yami is going to make the kids cry for sure! Yeah!

uu, uu! what happened!! was it darz that screamed, or yugi? which one? (im guessing dartz... am i right? did somebody come and easkue him? hmm? what?) i cant wait till the next chappie ^_^