don't take this the wrong way or anything but:
GET OFF YOUR LAZY BUTT AND WRITE MORE! I LIKE THIS STORY AND YOU GOTTA UPDATE! IT'S BEEN YEARS SINCE YOU'VE UPDATED!

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Loved the anatomy of the merpeople! That was awesome. As well as the prologe. I can't wait for the 1st chappie! You can do it! UPDATE SOON!! ^^

-Katie-

PS-I'm your first reviewer! I deserve cookies. hehe!