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| hotchner 2006-01-13 ch 2,  | abuseThe story is very good. I would enjoy reading more about it. Keep up the good writing. |
| Knight Wild 2005-11-19 ch 2, | abuseAh, why did you stop? You're gonna keep writing, right? Right? This is a really good story. |
| scififreakmi 2005-03-28 ch 2, | abusedude you know i love it! its so good! you gotta update soon!(maybe while i'm in FLORIDA so i have something to read when i come back lol) |
| Arcablue 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, very good so far! Keep writing, it's good, not overly emotional, but worthy of being an episode of the show... Keep writing! |
| Elsie 2004-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a lovely story! Poor Mac - don't you just want to give him a hug? I look forward to reading more of this. |
| jd burns 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseYou better update!! Nice to finally see a story that deals with the aftermath of Claire's death. |
| IceDusted 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuse: D I like it. You seemed to have gotten Mac's personality really well! People seem in character. Hope you update soon! ~IceDusted 'Stella took in the dark shadows under his eyes, the haggard look fixated on his face, and the pain he tried to keep hidden in his eyes. She wished she could do something to take away his pain, but she knew the only person that could had fallen with the towers on that September morning. Reluctantly, she nodded.' I love that paragraph! |
| scififreakmi 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abusei love it! its so sad, but i love it!(its better than when you showed it to me @skool! ugh...skool...) UPDATE SOON! :) |
| Lament 2004-12-17 ch 1, | abuseSo far, so good! I think you captured both Mac's and Stella's voices really well. I like the story you've set up and look forward to seeing where it takes us. I don't know if you plan to deal with the case the team is working on, but if you do, that might be a good way to balance Mac's story (which could get uber-angsty). Anyway, good start! |