 Gabriel's Trumpet 10/4/07 . chapter 1Aw... so sweet. |
 silver sea star 2/3/04 . chapter 2 *Laughs* Wow. This feels so odd. I haven't reviewed in such a long time, that now, it feels awkward. So, I apologize in advance if this review is sadly lacking... In any case, I found your two-shot very nicely written. In my opinion, writing the same scene from two different perspectives can pose quite the challenge for any author, but your fic didn't suffer from any such problem. So good job and write on! :) |
 Equinox 1/26/03 . chapter 2That was very excellent, wow. Although I really wonder what Van was really thinking that when he gave CPR to Hitomi. It was probably like "gods I hope I don't crack her ribs" or something like that. The way he was pushing, man Hitomi should have woken up in a lot of pain. Anyhow that was my little sidetrack. I think this 2 parter captured the essence of episode 11 wonderfully. The thoughts of each character were magneficentlly portrayed. I liked it. Keep up the good work.
Nox |
 Aeka-himme 1/26/03 . chapter 2Aww.. damnit.. I think I closed the window too soon for my review before. *cries* I keep doing that damnit! Oh well, I shall try to repeat a few of the things I said thought.
Firstly, I really liked your fic and the thoughts of Hitomi and Van. Secondly, I congradulate you in awe that I found no spelling or grammar mistakes, that or they were so insignificant that I don't remember them. Thirdly, I saw from the descriptions for a couple of your other fics that you like writing thses type of fics(the kind where they're all first person narratives and are reflections of the actual events that occured during the series) and that you're great at writing them!
I think that's about all.. oh wait! One more thing, I made a point that I didn't know the word "senkensha" was japanese romaji for "seer". That's interesting. So with all that said, I've got to go!
*Aeka* |
 Kitami Blu what is this sign in u speak of 10/11/02 . chapter 1 Wow! That was great! What a perfect summary... and so adorable too! Another great fic by Navy Brat! Yay! _ |
 Vampiress Pandora 3/30/02 . chapter 1That was a very good summary of that episode. I saw that episode and you practically had a perfect view of it. i love to watch Escaflowne, I was able to watch all of them from a friend. that was very very good. |
 Avaris Sky 12/9/01 . chapter 1 Loved it... please write some more! |
 Aeryka I CAN'T LOG IN 11/20/01 . chapter 1 YEAH VAN AND HITOMI FOREVER! |
 Hyzenthlay 6/5/01 . chapter 1 Wow... This is great! Could you write another fic? I've read both of yours and am dying to read more! ;) |
 anon 4/22/01 . chapter 1 *sniff, sniff* Beautiful! Simply beautiful! *wipes away tears* I'm a HUGE Van&Hitomi fan. I really enjoyed reading this fan fiction. Hey, would you ever consider writting a sequel? Hehehehehe |
 Maya H 4/10/01 . chapter 1This story was very creative and I really liked it even though I haven't watched a single episode of it before when I had the chance,but I guess your fic makes me know somewhat of what it is about. |
 Theo G 4/3/01 . chapter 1 Awsome fanfic! I love it! You really dug deep into Van's mind I see _ Once again, this is a beautiful fanfic. Anyone who says otherwise is insane. |
 Sakura Scout 3/31/01 . chapter 1 This is really good! Write more! |
 celena 3/29/01 . chapter 1 I wish you could see the grin on my face... this was gooood! thank's. |
 Koal 3/29/01 . chapter 1 BEST FIC EVER! SOOOO ADORABLE! Maybe you should write one of what he's thinking when he puts the ointment on her leg, or at the Energist mine, or something like that...hehehe... |