This is just delicious and so funny !

And this one as well, I'm looking forward to you and Zambi coming together again! :)

Uh oh.. church time! Hm, and whose memories are really the ones garbled up here?

The Wizard of Oz references really cracked me up!

Teehee, kissing it better, eh?

rofl, the full of shit and brown eyes comment!

Curious, a disowned brother of Severus.

*snickers at 'Have fun' note*

I bet there was extensive twinkling somehow attached as well.

Ohdear, best beware of trunks packed by Albus and Minerva!

Who says appropriate behaviour is more fun that inappropriate one, hmm? And aww, someone's cold heart appears to be melting at least..

Haha, Severus' comment about animals and Albus' family, that really made me giggle ;) And of course, Severus being fondled and sucked on by Hermione, ohmyy! ;D

Obviously, I am not going to review my own story. This is more a quick response to HermioneFan21, who has accused me in two separate reviews for this story of plagiarizing myself.

Rest assured, anyone reading this story, I am not only Michmak on , I am also Michmak on Ashwinder and the Petulant Poetess as well. Zambi and I are great friends and have actually written a couple of other stories together, both of which are posted on this site under my name but with credit also given to her in the authors notes, and she is also a contributor to the authors notes.

HermioneFan21 - I appreciate your review. I wish you had maybe read the authors notes or perhaps asked me via a personal message if I was the same Michmak as the Michmak on Ashwinder before posting a signed review that I cannot remove basically accusing me of stealing my own story, but...whatever.

even though you :- :- stole this story from :- somewhere . ?sid14471&i1 and someone :- else: michmak and zambonigirl !

this is still an EXCELLENT STORY! TOP MARKS ALL AROUND! but will there not be an update to this story soon? ! its been AGES and AGES and AGES and AGES and AGES and AGESSSSSSSS now since you have updated this story!

hey you :- stole this story EXCELLENT STORY from somewhere else which was was written by michmak and zambonigirl first!

see:

. ?sid8056

why did :- you do that! :-

Oh WOW this is amazing! And you haven't updated it in years! This is indescribably sad because this fic is so DAMN ADORABLE! It makes my insides go all squirmy and my toes curl . it's some damn hot fiction and i wish you'd finish it.

I know this story has gone four years without an update. I know I should never have started reading it in the first place having known it was unfinished...and for so long, yet I did it. I dove in, started reading, and unfortunately, loved it. LOVED IT. I knew I would, I knew it would be great and then I'd have to sit and stare at the little advance chapter button knowing there would be nowhere to go. Masochist that I am, I just couldn't help myself. This is such a fun story. I really, really want to see how it ends. I don't suppose I've hit it at just the right moment and you're going to miraculously start updating again by any chance? I certainly hope that's the case. This is one of those that's going to sit and niggle at the back of my mind for ages!

So good...

Cheers!

RV