Yet another great story, I'm tempted to plow into the next one straight away, but I'm worried you might not update..and that I'd be reading into a brick wall. Although I know I'm going to once I get done with review I know I'm gonna go straight to your profile click on the story and start reading. I guess it's better to read than never at all right? Ok I'll be replying probably to the next review pages for the next stories chapter. Laters. ^_^

This is one of the best chapters of this story to me, not only do I love Bastila and Revan respectively but having them interacting again is just great. The speeder chase had me laughing and I could picture it almost perfectly. I suspect Canderous is the new Mandalor? I haven't played KOTOR 2 yet, but I have read a few summaries and spoilers so a have some sort of idea what happens. I like the Dustil chapters I do...but the ones with Revan are just so much more enjoyable, maybe just cause she's our heroine hmm? Goin to read more, and just so you know your stories are causing me to be sleep deprived and my sight to be ruined lol. XD

This was a truly great story just like the first one and is great as the third one is turning out to be!

GOSH DARNIT that's so sad... :( It really sets up the next story well, though. Jeez. Now I'm all depressed. No happy Carth meeting baby for first time? Aww.

Can I have more of your unfinished sequel to this, please?

Ooh... Bastila has gotten closer with Canderous has she? Very interesting. I also like the Malak/Revan flashback where she slices off his jaw. How very cruel of her - poor Malak...

Loved the sequence where the Sith are trying to twist Dustil's memories and lure him to the dark side... nicely done.

The variation on why Revan left to go to the unknown regions... that the threat of the true sith are actually her fault (instead of the lame reasoning they used in the game).

Anyway, a lovely sad ending to a lovely story. Can't wait to see the sequel!

Ooh... like the Morgana/Dustil flashback where Dustil has a "feeling" that he shouldn't leave his mother. Boy there has to be some serious guilt issues about that. And then the later flashback, where we get to see the attack on Telos, though kid!Dustil's eyes, was terribly sad.

Heh... love how Dustil is worried about what Revan's going to do to him about Tova... They really do have rather marvelous romantic chemistry together, and I like how Dustil shares his father's verbal traits (calling her "sister," stumbling over his words). The two of them really are wonderfully cute.

Love the post star forge celebration flashback. Heheheh - Victory: The Carth Onasi story featuring Carth and Bastila is truly priceless.

Loved the little angsty conversation between dead!Malak and Revan. For some reason, I find Malak to be an interesting character, so I'm a sucker for stories that portray him. The Carth flashback was lovely too.

“They’re planning on using you as a ritual sacrifice. If you have any last words, you should say them now.” ahahahaha - I love Revan's bitchy sense of humor.

Using the sightings of the now stolen Ebon Hawk, was a wonderfully sly reference to the events of Kotor 2.

Yay! Jolee! It's good to see him alive and well. He's my all time favorite kotor character, so it is good to see him in your story. Jolee isn't the only one who wants to see Carth's face when Katrina tells him...

I'm liking the chemistry between Dustil and Tora Vin. I hope for his sake that she's not Sith.

I am late reviewing the final chapter, mainly because am in mourning for it BEING the final chapter...you've spoiled us all terribly with your frequent updating!

It's a perfect final chapter though. I love Carth's reaction, I just love it. Perfect.

“Whoa. That…takes me back.” He murmured unsteadily. Katrina touched his cheek softly.

Gah, that's so sad, it's so...perfect!

You're done such an amazing job with Rev/Kat's character development too, from the first fiction to this, and then, presumably, beyond...

And you've left the door open for the sequel. I can't wait for the sequel!! You've spoiled us, you realize this :)

Thanks for writing. I've enjoyed this much.

*pouts* It's over! Oh I'm so sad. It was a great ride while it lasted...

wow...another very well written fic! :D I love the way you characterize the characters and the plot was excellent ^^...a rather abrupt ending though...is there gonna be another sequel? ^^ *hopes hopefully*

Yay, now that I've beaten the game, I can go back to reading your fic!

I really liked the Carth's observation that maybe the galaxy is getting back at him for being gone from Morgana and Dustil so much. I also like his reflection about how he technically out ranks her... too funny. This whole chapter is a nice way to weave what Kotor2 says happened to Revan into your plot.

Loved the Dustil/Shardaan/Uthar flashback at Korriban. It is a nice illumination on how completely messed up a good portion of Dustil's youth was. I also loved the whole, I joined the Sith to get a girl reasoning and the Selene/Dustil flashback.

Beautiful. Just...just right, you know what I mean?

I'm speechless. But in a good way. And it takes a lot to render me speechless.

Nicely done.

Sad as the outcome is in Sith Lords, this adds a small amount of hope with Celyn.

Still sad though.

Well done!

Loved this line:

“Maybe the galaxy’s just not that big.”

Not for people like us, at least, he replied.

Love the entire Phin exchange, and the Dathan exchange too. And the flashback scene, showing one difference between Revan and Katrina--Katrina let herself be loved.

I'll say it again, you've made the whole going off on her own thing that's now canon seem logical. And that's no small feat.

“Maybe you should stop becoming overlord of every government you happen to stumble into, get out to Telos sometime, and see for yourself.”

Great line, and so fitting, too. Is there more coming? *hopeful look*