nice and sweet i like it great stand alone.

aw
how sweet
great fic

yeah, well im not into slashes and stuff like dat.. but this one is definitely good! i like the descriptions and the flow of the story. good job! =)

I loved this story, overall found it to be a departure from the normal stuff I find in PG fics. One thing, however, is that you could have added a little bit of a hint for Emma's feelings for Shalimar towards the beginning, I think it might have made the ending feel like more of a resolution, and given more of a picture of the situation before the fic started. Another thing that could have been added to make the ending feel more like a finish is a little more overall tension between Emma and Shalimar. Not huge amounts of sexual tension slathered on like jam; just a little more inside Emma's thoughts and feelings, a particular image in the setting or action, a detail or nervous habit to get a little bit more of a feel for the mood, a reaction that Emma has to something that Shalimar does, or vice versa. A little bit more physical description would also add more flavor and a particular feeling to the story.

Really sweet ;) Like always :) Can't wait to read your other Stories ;)

sweet, sweet so sweet i loved it!

cute little one shot. hopes there's more to come from your pens.