I was surprised to find this labeled Rose/Ed however, reading the story, I do understand why you chose to label it that way and point out the Ed/Winry hints. Edward obviously had/has a lot of growing up to do and Rose was not the person who could make him do it - he needed to do it himself.

Winry's stress and pain and compassion all showed themselves very well at the end.

Not bad. It's one of the few Ed/Rose stories I've read and liked. Great job :)

You know, this is the only Rose/Ed I've ever read, and you make it good. Really good. I wish there was more of it out there, but, pf,no, she's the most hated character in the fandom.

In any case, you win the every point award.

That was lovely. And did a preciously good job of catching the very reason why I have no belief in Ed managing a lasting romance.

this story is good but don't let winry have ed!make ed run after his beloved rose!or else another man will come in her life!gasp!

aw i like this alot...i hope ed goes to find rose( O that ryhmes)

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That was so imaginative! And so very sweet...it contained so many lessons and details... I loved it. Definitely fave.

That was a pretty good story there, but... isn't Ed gonna try to get Rose back? If not this story shouldn't be in Rose's fics. I like it... if Ed goes off to find Rose.

Interesting. Sad, but interesting. Fairly written. Continue to write FMA... :)