i could kind of see the last line coming. but i still liked it. its cute and sort of open-your-eyes too. punctuation and grammar. thats all. :)

--(my name is) Inconsequential

yah it's true kaiba is the most human inhuman person...sounds about right in a very confusing and odd way.

Cute! ^^

I love this story

Aw! Cuteness!
Short 'n' Sweet! Loved it!
Miguels-Lover

Really cute and with a touch of sadness to it. I love Kaiba's comment that he was the most human person he knoews -- given his earlier definition.

Fwoosh!
Awesome.
Mad skillz for j00.
^^
Nice work.

Water: Amazing truly amazing. You dont get many people who truly think like that and thats what dispite the shear shortness made this a fanstastic story. Great job
Wind & Fire & Earth: Hey what about us!
Water:..aww you ruined my reivew! get out u three

Interesting. Poor Jou, a slave to his body's wants! *grins* This was nicely done, great intraspection of the human psyche and all too! *grins* *waves*
Later yo,

Icy

the first time i saw someone take on the pet names in this sense

i'm glad someone did it, and i'm glad that someone writes as well as you do

very deep but very good like all of your works that i've ever read

That was great! ^_^

A ficlet that left me feeling torn between wanting to squeal at the Kaiba/Joey-cuteness and mental eyecandy, and consuming the food for thought it left me with. I enjoyed to read it a lot, at any rate. Kaiba's explanation of why he doesn't give up calling Joey a puppy, followed by that last line he spoke before going to sleep was simply brilliant. A great read!

nice story! that defination of humanity surely is cynical... haha... well, but it sounds really interesting and real too... sigh...

that was so simple but so cute ^^ i luv it!