Reviews for Pokémon Master: Rewrite

Fiction C9 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abuseThis is a whole new view on that idea. Congratulations. It's great. The description, conflict and feelings are well done. The part at the end adds a nice touch. Just because you've reached a goal, it doesn't mean everything's happy ever after. Keep writing.
Soft Flame Matthias 2005-05-13 ch 1,	abuseI like this story, you must have spent alot of time working on it. How one day you could be barking orders, the next, talking colectively and frindly twards each other. Now if only the people of the world saw each other as equals. perhaps this is only a figament of my imagination. but I do hope that this becomes a reality... someday. It's a shame you don't like AAMR's. Some can be realy insightful. Shure some can be mushy and... odd... but there a many gifted writers out there that express compassion though there work. They try to captivate their audience with words of wisdom, wisdom beyond even their years. The put all their hopes, dreams, experinces, and heart and soul. To make you fell some sort of emotion. Just to reach out to you. And if you so choose to begin reading these fic, I would be most deeply honored if you started with mine. Write from the Heart
EM-D8 2004-12-16 ch 1,	abuseAh, I like this. It shows much clearer thoughts, though the old are still there. It's definately been improved to the last version. It brings up some interesting points, and the use of repitition in every paragraph is well-used too. Nice work.