 dominoeb 2009-08-11 . chapter 49lolz. i stayed up past in the morning reading this. |
 hmm 2009-03-28 . chapter 1 Anna Sartin swallows sperm daily! |
 bcsaturdai 2009-03-20 . chapter 49Hello? Are you out there still? Well, if you are, you must finish this story! It is a humorous masterpiece. The main players are still in character like the original. The curse of the returning book is very funny. I would love to see how well Shuichi deals with Mexican food, and being a home owner.
Please come back and finish this! *gets on knees* PLEASE! |
 me 2009-03-14 . chapter 1 Anna the **! |
 Shadow Origins 2008-11-28 . chapter 8Wow...
Jail...
have fun you two! :D |
 2008-11-24 . chapter 5 Yup, the powers are out to get you, Yuki. :p |
 kuroneko1571 2008-10-28 . chapter 49I Love this fic. I just found it tonight and read ALL 49 Capters in one sitting. It's 2:00 am now and I have to be up at 6:30 for work, but once I started reading I couldn't stop. Humorous without turning into the slapstick that shows up in the manga (I love Gravi but some of the -antics in the manga get a wee bit over the top - Reiji & K mostly.)Very witty, had me rolling in several spots but very sweet too in places. Both Eiri and Shu are pretty much in character particularly if you assume that they grow both as individuals and a couple. A slightly softer Eiri (but still denying it of course, except to himself on occasion) & a slightly less oblivious Shu. I see no updates in 2 years. I really, really hope you decide to come back & finish this fic. It's well worth it and my favorite Gravi fic BY FAR. ^^ |
 BluStarBurst 2008-09-20 . chapter 1It's been two years since you updated. Have you officically abandoned this story? |
 Ani 2008-07-25 . chapter 49 Such a pity you didn't finish this... |
 Ani 2008-07-25 . chapter 15 Oh, Mesopotamian God, ROTFLMAO... Four Gay Elves strike again! :) You should try yourself in comedy play writing or something. This is just so damn funny! |
 Devil's Backbone 2008-07-15 . chapter 9so far this fic is a masterpiece. it's just so sweet and funny. Bravo!! |
 Psycho Supernova 2008-04-16 . chapter 49Wow. I'm really enjoying this. I hope you get around to dinishing it. ^_^ I want to see Riku come in. He's just too adorable not to wish for. I absolutely love the fic. It's adorable! And I love the way you've developed Yuki and Shuichi so far. |
 JiraiyasGirl 2008-02-07 . chapter 19WOw...I had no idea how long this story was until just now. I apologize for not reviewing all the chapters, but I just wanted to say Bravo! You've had me reading this story like a crack addict!! I'm currently "getting supplies in the basement" at work right now b/c i can't stop reading. This by far the best gravitation fan-fic I have ever had the pleasure of reading. ANd I almost peed my pants laughing at the end of this chapter (god thing i'm in the basement reading on my cell) when that book came back!! : ) |
 Marisal 2008-01-18 . chapter 49 This isn't really a review - I was really only wondering if you intended to continue writing fleeting inspiration. If you could reply or just post sup type of bulletin on your story, that would be great. thank you ^^ |
 blaqksilence 2008-01-11 . chapter 19Hey, I'm still enjoying it immensely and absolutely love it. You do have some spelling and grammar mistakes so I think getting a beta would be a good idea. The actual content is amazing, it's just the occasional language errors (such as "rather or not" instead of "whether or not"). However, I congratulate you on the plotline, the characterization, the amazing humour and just about everything else. I love this story. |