A really nice story; I enjoyed it immensly! Your characterisations were very detailed and thought-out, and they all came together very well. You did keep us hanging on for some time, but it made the end result that much more satisfying, I suppose...
(I really liked naruto's singing voice, or lack thereof!)
Many thanks for sharing!
T

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, HAHAHAHAHAHA, HAHAHAHAHAHA, HAHAHAHAHAH!

Oh man, you're AWESOME. SAKURA SUCKS.

"“Everybody hatessh me. Life hatessh me.” That was Sakura. She accidentally knocked over half of the empties in front of her, causing a crescendo of breaking glass. “Sasshuke-kun… Sasshuke-kun hatessh me….”"

ROFL ROFL ROFL.

"PINK HAIR AND BUSHY BROWS"

HAHAHAHAHAHAA, OMG, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!
OH MAN OH MAN OH MAN, I'M DYING, I'M DYING.

YOU'RE AMAZING. OMG.

I came across your story 2hours ago and spent the entire time reading it. Not only did you make naruto totally hot (which he is), you made naruto and hinata really really really cute together!

And your pacing, and the way you tell the story is flawless. Really. You've been showing, never telling, in these entire 9 chapters, and that's really really good.

You're an amazing writer. I totally wish i could show the way you do, and stop telling. LOLS.

Yeah anyway, kudos. (:

he totally deserved that

why didn't he just use the jutsu were he turns into a girl?

A very cute story. You need to do some proofreading though. Many misspelled words and the like.

interesting beginning,
many twists and turns filled with emotions. unexpected situations and hilarious moments.

who knew a night in a bar would bring naruto such fortune ^w^

Heyy~ I love Satisfaction! ^_^

i don't think there's a fic i've enjoyed more thoroughly than this. you've taken the reader on an emotional journey, yet in such an amusing, heartfelt way. i really hope you'll continue writing for us.

this is the best story is there a part two

nice!

I really liked this, but you should not have rated it 'M'.

This was a great story, thanks for writing it!

That was really beautiful. I loved the extreme detail, the emotions, the IN-CHARACTER characters (a rare find these days) and you didn't ruin the plot in the end with something like sex. A masterpiece of well written work. Thankyou, I'm off to read your other ones now...
Xx

I THOUGHT SHE HAD A ** SPRAINED ANKLE!!?!? XD Lol.

WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU AND FORGETTING THIS INFORMATION!? V,V; Lol. No worries, just playin'. :) In all seriousness though, this chapter was teh awesomeness, despite the many flaws in the story. >,>; Lol. X3

*Looks at you with a look similar, if not exactly like the average reaction of seeing someone grow a second head*

Why the ** would Naruto want to protect SOMEONE ELSE after all he's been through? Don't you think he protects his precious people, and extremely precious people enough? v.v

Seriously!

Good story though - you're a great writer! :)

There are particular things I like about this - including the made-up songs, for real. ^,^;

- "The peeing man to Naruto’s left called out: “Hey man, keep it off my g’dam shoes…**! Oh… it’s you… never mind… ** all you want….” He didn’t want anything to do with a boy with a demon in his belly."

Lol. XD Nice one. X3

Love the conflicts, but this honestly makes me think a Naruto x Hinata pairing wouldn't work in canon. X.o; It's not for Naruto.