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keplo
2008-07-19
ch 9,
abusewow...just...wow...could you continue this story PLEASE! or make book 2 or something
the16thday
2008-07-07
ch 9,
abuseAww, this story was cute. A little dark at first with all the drinkin and such, but it quickly turned around. This is going on my favorites list for sure!
kalinnnnn
2008-05-22
ch 9,
abuse"She swallowed hard at the ‘Et tu, Hinata’ look the pink-haired girl gave her." That had me cracking... :D :D :) Though I couldn't get it at first, I'm rather slow...
kalinnnnn
2008-05-18
ch 3,
abuseYou know, your fanfic's really good, you describe the atmosphere really well... as if I'm part of it!
ToxicManipulator
2008-05-15
ch 9,
abuseExcellent read! Looking forward to new fics you're gonna write!
Neccor
2008-05-06
ch 9,
abuseIt's nice to see a naru/hina fluff where Naruto stays clueless to the end. An original take on the plot and it was done expertly. This deserves a spot on my favorite stories list. Yay!
Ogden-Primal Daemon King
2008-04-28
ch 9,
abuseYup, Indeed it is.

Nabanaba
bigboi
2008-04-22
ch 9, anon.
abuseGreat story and love the development of character emotions.
NaruIno-Kyuubi
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abusegood story, keep it up
AlphaC
2008-04-01
ch 9, anon.
abuseClassic. Ah, I must say all your stories are always a pleasure to read.

Haven't been on this site in a long time. This story is the first I have read in a few months or so. Glad to see your still kicking around.
Gai Bureze
2008-03-15
ch 9,
abusewell... another Dave-d story now...

'twas good.
I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Now to sleep... after games...
bigjseph
2008-02-23
ch 9,
abusebrilliant stuff right here, read through all of it in a day.
could have done without the epilogue but it wasn't bad.
you did a wonderful job with all the pain and heartbreak and i was about ready to hurt something when naruto kept saying stupid things. anyway its a great story
Hyuuga Zakuro
2008-02-08
ch 9,
abuseYouth is grand. Your story is also great. Well written. (I hate writers who can't write...) Great plot line and good use of devices. I think you even managed to keep the OOC to a minimum. 9/10.
NirvanaSword
2008-02-05
ch 9,
abuseYeah...Youth is damn ** grand!
Kitsune no Kutsuu
2008-01-27
ch 9,
abuseSo good! i laughed, i cried, i wished for more! Bravo! Bravo! Encore, encore!
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