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| keplo 2008-07-19 ch 9, | abusewow...just...wow...could you continue this story PLEASE! or make book 2 or something |
| the16thday 2008-07-07 ch 9, | abuseAww, this story was cute. A little dark at first with all the drinkin and such, but it quickly turned around. This is going on my favorites list for sure! |
| kalinnnnn 2008-05-22 ch 9, | abuse"She swallowed hard at the ‘Et tu, Hinata’ look the pink-haired girl gave her." That had me cracking... :D :D :) Though I couldn't get it at first, I'm rather slow... |
| kalinnnnn 2008-05-18 ch 3, | abuseYou know, your fanfic's really good, you describe the atmosphere really well... as if I'm part of it! |
| ToxicManipulator 2008-05-15 ch 9, | abuseExcellent read! Looking forward to new fics you're gonna write! |
| Neccor 2008-05-06 ch 9, | abuseIt's nice to see a naru/hina fluff where Naruto stays clueless to the end. An original take on the plot and it was done expertly. This deserves a spot on my favorite stories list. Yay! |
| Ogden-Primal Daemon King 2008-04-28 ch 9, | abuseYup, Indeed it is. Nabanaba |
| bigboi 2008-04-22 ch 9, anon. | abuseGreat story and love the development of character emotions. |
| NaruIno-Kyuubi 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abusegood story, keep it up |
| AlphaC 2008-04-01 ch 9, anon. | abuseClassic. Ah, I must say all your stories are always a pleasure to read. Haven't been on this site in a long time. This story is the first I have read in a few months or so. Glad to see your still kicking around. |
| Gai Bureze 2008-03-15 ch 9, | abusewell... another Dave-d story now... 'twas good. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Now to sleep... after games... |
| bigjseph 2008-02-23 ch 9, | abusebrilliant stuff right here, read through all of it in a day. could have done without the epilogue but it wasn't bad. you did a wonderful job with all the pain and heartbreak and i was about ready to hurt something when naruto kept saying stupid things. anyway its a great story |
| Hyuuga Zakuro 2008-02-08 ch 9, | abuseYouth is grand. Your story is also great. Well written. (I hate writers who can't write...) Great plot line and good use of devices. I think you even managed to keep the OOC to a minimum. 9/10. |
| NirvanaSword 2008-02-05 ch 9, | abuseYeah...Youth is damn ** grand! |
| Kitsune no Kutsuu 2008-01-27 ch 9, | abuseSo good! i laughed, i cried, i wished for more! Bravo! Bravo! Encore, encore! |