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karina305
2008-04-30 . chapter 12
I was looking over some old stories I had already read and when I came to this one I couldn't help refreshing my memory at how endearing it was to me. Which is a slight surprise. I am not so inclined -- a sappy person. The truly capturing part of the story was how terrible Seto was at comprehending new relationships. The fact being he didn't truly admit the situation he was in until connected by mouth to said person's face. Another amusing factor being that he admitted significant things not to the person himself, but first to Bakura of all people. Twice. I guess some of the most endearing people are the respectfully inept. Thank you indeed for your gracious gift.
FreakNo94
2007-08-03 . chapter 12
Aww! so sweet!! Youre a really great writer. (:
SeReNiTy9293
2007-07-19 . chapter 12
(sniff) (sniff)... great ending...
SeReNiTy9293
2007-07-19 . chapter 11
(giggles)... this fanfic is so good...
SeReNiTy9293
2007-07-19 . chapter 10
A very well written chapter as always... ^_^
SeReNiTy9293
2007-07-19 . chapter 8
Sorry i wasn't able to submit any reviews up until now... I just got so hooked up with the story... This story is really great... makes me giggle... lol...
TakabiTenshi
2007-05-28 . chapter 12
aw,i love the ending!i like the present idea too!its very thoughtful.
see ya!^^
KnotofRibbon
2006-06-28 . chapter 12
...Wow...This is one of the best stories I've ever read. You did a wonderful job. I'm glad I didn't stop reading it...Because I couldn't. *frown* You made Otogi evil yet good though...Oh well. It added to the story. Anyway, really nice!
FanFiction.net fan
2006-04-01 . chapter 12
Kaiba's got plans and Yami's got plans and unfortunately they clash a little bit.
FanFiction.net fan
2006-04-01 . chapter 11
Woah, Mokuba fighting, this I gotta see!

Um, guys, Mokuba's still in the room?

Quick way to ger rid of Mokuba, chuck him your wallet.
FanFiction.net fan
2006-04-01 . chapter 10
'Will you take me home no?''No' What is Mokuba going to say?

Oh, Yami's moved in. An idyllic Sunday morning...

I agree with Mokuba. Aww.
FanFiction.net fan
2006-04-01 . chapter 9
Finally! By the sound of your notes, Seto's finally going to find out that Yami likes him! Yeah!

Aahh!

Stroke his cheek like you did when you thought he was asleep!

Phew, I thought Mokuba had appeared and seen them.

Even though he didn't appear Mokuba broke the mood.

Yes! Yami finally told him! Yes!

Woah...

Oh...
FanFiction.net fan
2006-04-01 . chapter 8
Oh, Yami's going to fall asleep against Seto, how cute!

Oh, Yami's fallen asleep. Oh...

I hope Seto finds out that Yami likes him before he collapses, but then if he collapses Yami might find him and comfort him. I'm torn between the two.
FanFiction.net fan
2006-04-01 . chapter 6
Yami loves Seto! Yami loves Seto!

Seto loves Yami though he's afraid to show it!

You could have just picked him up and carried Yami to bed Seto.
FanFiction.net fan
2006-04-01 . chapter 5
I like that. '“You know you can still work for…” “No.”'
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