Loved it. What a gorgeous way to depict it.

Beautiful poetry, the repeating phrase truly fits. Adore the last two lines.

spooky...

I like this poem did write kylie well, you showed the regretful side of her, and that was very good. Keep up the good work!

I really liked your peom. It seemed to make sense of why she would do it when you put it like that.

Well, you most certainly wrote Lady Kylie better than I could've! Using this image of her in your story is perfectly fine. Actually, she seems much more ... deep (I guess?) in this poem than she did in the books. You gave her more of a motive and drive than the books ever did, I found. Wonderful job!