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DMbranolaHP
2009-07-25 . chapter 31
Ah! This story is AMAZING! I've tried to read it as FAST as possible these last two days. It makes me so sad that H/D aren't together and that Harry keeps stringing Mikhail on. Also, I can't wait to find out the significance of the necklace. Please update as soon as you can! =D
nintschibintschi
2009-04-10 . chapter 31
great amazing story
please update very soon
thanks Nintschi
carcar3
2009-01-04 . chapter 31
ohh, i just read your entire story (over the course of nearly three days, mind you!) love, love, love it! tho i kinda wish that harry and draco would get together already! oh well :)

thanks for sharing,

car
blue-feather
2008-12-02 . chapter 1
I could've liked this story. I should since it's slash, i love slash.But your ofc "raven" killed it all. It is just the first chapter and I don't even want to know what happens next. I see your AN and i assume that this raven girl is also in your other fics. I can't help but feel like she's a self-inserted mary-sue.And her character is very annoying like :

“No.” Was Raven’s low reply. She leaned forward so that her mouth was right next to the Slytherin boy’s ear. Placing a hand on his upper thigh and squeezing it a bit she breathed, “Me.”

Even Pansy Parkinson isn't that annoying.
Flibber T. Gibbet
2008-10-07 . chapter 31
This has stuck with me since I first started reading fanfiction, and I've lost it and found it at least four times.

So thanks... for keeping it going.

It's a good story, and those are hard to find.
lotrhpfan1234
2008-08-04 . chapter 31
YAY an update!! Pity there won't be another for a while, but good on you for trying to make this fic even better than it is already!! I might just have to re-read it!! XD
of Serendip
2008-08-02 . chapter 31
I have to reread some of the few last chapters to recall the story. It's been so long since last update. Then I remember some of the things I used to feel towards some characters like how I thought Raven is a sick ** needed to be put down. Draco is one messed up young man who in love with a psycho ** and have no rights to yearn for Harry and interfere with Harry's love life. Or Harry who can't see a good thing in front of him. I like Mikhali. I hope they end up together and Those sicko will commit duo suicide or something. Alas it's unlikely that you would comply with my wish.

I'm glad you update.
Bree13
2008-08-01 . chapter 31
Oh thank goodness you've updated! I first found this story long after your last update, and I'm thrilled that you've decided to continue it! Thank you, and keep up the good work!
txcalbud
2008-07-31 . chapter 31
Glad to see you back. look forward to seeing what comes next. broken hearts denial and is harry over draco? i look forward to more to come.
malfoy+harry
2008-07-31 . chapter 31
I read this story on your website but I want to review so I come back here to do it. I absolutely love this story and I am so happy you have updated. I am so glad to have you back. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please don't make us wait that long again. Also I want to read the re-writes you do so please email out a note like you do with updates. Thank you! I really hope Harry isn't getting our Draco. I can't wait to see what happens between them when they have New Years together. Who will kiss who at midnight? Update soon!

Until then,
malfoy+harry
fifespice
2008-07-31 . chapter 31
ooh good chapter but mikhail is very serious about harry hope ahry deionst inadvertantly break his ehart beause of still having feelings for draco
Hell's Jester
2007-11-12 . chapter 30
I adore this story. I've actually been reading it at your website.
It's easier to read, and it doesn't have all the fun parts taken out courtesy of FFnet.
I haven't checked this in a long time, and I missed about ten new chapters.
I''ve been reading like mad between work and school to catch up.
Can't wait for more, even though I know you must have a million other things to do.
I have you on alert, so I'll know.
BTW: I don't hate Raven anymore. I used to, but I've come to kind of like her. I think she's getting in over her head, and will end up getting hurt, but I feel sorry. Of course I am still an avid Draco/Harry fan,so...
Hope life's treating you fair. Luv ya!
fanfiction-gurl
2007-07-24 . chapter 30
hey i love this story it is my favorite out of both of my accounts on FFN. i can't wait for you to update it and it makes me sad that it hasn't lataly. but i do not wish pressure on you. I hope you have read the latest installment of the Harry Potter books. i just finished the final book and wonder if you will right a fan fic based on what happened? well i enjoy your work and look forward to more of it .
raining tears
2007-06-14 . chapter 30
so, i got your most recent email from Autumn Star and was disappointed in your readers. I personally see no reason to take what they say to heart. If they do not like your characters, that is their problem. I am personally slightly frustrated by mikael (sorry about the spelling.. ), but i see the need for him. Draco still needs to redeem himself and until then, I am glad Harry isn't with him. As for Raven, I think she might be my favorite character. I would love to see a companion piece about her, one shot or other wise, having to do with her art. You described that part of your story so well! I love her interactions with Harry and Draco. Keep your chin up because you are talented and only you know where your story is going!

Congrats also on Original Sin!!
SR.
Eagle-Eyes
2007-06-06 . chapter 30
An absolutely beautiful story - and yet so believable considering the major pairing. Not many can write that pairing together in a believable manner.

Love it. Keep up the good work.!
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