 Reno Spiegel 12/15/04 . chapter 1There's something about this that I love. Really, I can't put my finger on it, but this may be the best piece of yours I've read aside from that one about Gay!Reno and the spider. It might just be the reality or something. . .I dunno. Love it, though, Drakon. |
 Tijuana Pirate 12/15/04 . chapter 1Hey drakonlily,
30 min, no editing? that's brave. I don't think I could post something without editing it first. I liked the idea of the piece... but I'm not so sure about the execution. I found Tseng slightly out of character in this... nothing too blatant... I don't know. To me, Tseng was/is intimidating. I can't picture ppl telling him off like that and I can't see any of the Turks taking that. Then again, I did like the fact that there *was* racial tension. It's not something most people talk about in these. It makes sense though, considering that there was a war in Wutai. I love the slurrs too: Wute, Mutt. And the ending was cute. I love Rude. I swear, he knows EVERYTHING. _ heh heh. I loved it "I know you Se." Se's a pretty cool name for him too. Anyways, for what it was, it was a good story.
T. Pirate |