Wow!I love this fic so much funny and uh...can I ask you someting..why you don't update this fic again for so long? or you non idea about this,sorry if I make you not please,but it's ok maybe you'll busy for that,well update please please please.

Interesting... But I think you're focusing to much on Sephiroth and Areith. There should be some more Tifa and Cloud also in there. But I like it. Hope yu update soon!

NO.. *coughs*
*coughs more*
*gasps for air*
you cant leave it at that; WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
D@#* cliffhangars!
*sighs*
please, please, please finish the rest.

:: sniffs:: It's ...sad...

Please Write more I really want to read this story. What happens next this is interesting. Please Continue...Oh and one of the most funniest thing was Aeris smacked Sephiroth. What is Tifa and Cloud going to do, What is Aeris and Sephiroth going to do? Please Continue this story need more. Sorry I never reviewed before. _;;;;;;;;

I liked it alot. Just add those quotation marks and exclamation points and you're free to go! I had no problems with the fic except for that... The plot was exceptional... It's just that the fourth chapter just says "story not found!" Horrible... just horrible. ;_;

Okay... so I may not be beloved, but I like to think I am _ I'm not sure if I will be continuing this fic or not, I have this idea for a new Rufus fics. I want to finishe Fate first... why am I writing this in the review! RUFUS WAINWRIGHT IS GOING TO BE ON! *screams and runs to the tv*

PLease finish this story. I don't like being left in the dark and I know that you have the writing ability to finish this fanfic. Please finish this story, pretty please with sugar on top. _

Wow. This is an amazing story so far, I love this! I can't wait to see what you go and do with this cause you're using a pretty original idea here! I stare in awe at you.

Still going strong... keep it up, or I'll kill you...

...Well that was very well writen! Well done!;) But of course you know I love Cloud and Aeris together...*Grins*... but you're story is soo well writen, but I already know what happen's next, heheh... Bye.

Oh Go on! I like it and it's original. Please Go on

I'm so glad you decided to continue this, since it's an interesting concept. There's a couple things I noticed as I reread through the story, though. Plural of bunny is bunnies, not bunny's.

And wasn't it the Promised Land? With a D?

One more tip: You have a LOT of introductory dependent clauses and participial phrases, but you aren't seperating them with a comma.

Example: With her back resting against the door she gave a quiet sigh. Letting her mind wander she simply relaxed for a few minutes.

Should be: With her back resting against the door, she gave a quiet sigh. Letting her mind wander, she simply relaxed for a few minutes.

You have a lot of sentences like that, too, so maybe you should look into varying sentence structure a bit, too.

But me LIKE PLOT. -

(And boy, I'm constructive with the reviews, right? _)

PLEASE PLEASE PLEEASSSEEEE WRITE MORE!

It's great so far but it would have been better with more of Tifa in it. Sephiroth has a cool attitude so he can easliy replace Cloud anyday! _