Really great story!

please more chapters! do u no what it's like to love a story much that u absolutly must hear the rest!

Cute story

that was so cute luv it!

great story :)

how is this rated "k"? i wouldve rated it like t or k

no no no no! plz more chapters! all of the ones i have read so far, end with them getting together! plzplzplzplzplzplzplz miore chapters!

omgsh! i loved it! how sweet! he really didn't like the idea of them making out at midnight did he? how cute! loved it!

aw!

Aw... That's so cute! I love the whole idea of Michael "protecting" Mia. Also, the part right after Mia states her theory (I sound so... scientific) and she falls on the floor... That part just seemed very, well, Mia. Great writing!

it's freaking awesome and so sweet i hate kenny lol

I liked it her mom actually sed yes and we all know that the only reason she invited michael was not because she didnt have enough guys now is it. No its because she is head over heels in love with him

Aw, this is so sweet! And so ... them. This would have been a cool way for the whole thing to have happened in the books, though then Mia would be with Kenny more (I think) and that would suck.

-LILY (with only two l's)

I liked it. :) Yup. :) Nice job.

I like the story, cept more chapters would be good too :D

Yayness of Michael and his knightness lol.

My writing is off.

jeni