That was a really good take on what might have happened if we had been left as a cliffhanger made it out to be. I loved your use of Zhaan most of all, but it was certainly heart wrenching to read John trying to cope. Well done.

omg so sad!

This is a beautifully written UR that delves deeply into two points of view-John's shattered mind and those of the Moyan's around him. I like how you switched from Zhaan to John because it illustrated just how frelled the situation was. I was so sad by the end and glad that this was not the actual outcome.

Wow that was so deep, emotional, Farscapesque and so sad!

Brilliant Work!