This story seems really interesting...can't wait til you update.

Oh please reply and tell me if you're still writing this. The suspense is killing me.

Why would Sherlock poison her family? Or is it that he didn't and someone tricked her into thinking he did?

This is an amazing story, it's so exciting. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Excellent effort! I wish you post more to this one. :)

Peace!

This is Clare bear. I've been waiting for over a week! I need to know what happens. I've been checking daily, and I am highly disappoined.
Here are some ideas if you've got writers block
1- Go from the point where Liz decides to go back in time. Tell that from her POV, like
"Liz felt time rushing by her face, and stumbled as her feet hit solid ground"
(very cliche, but I have hmwk 2 do, so I'm trying not 2 get caught on the net)
2- Have Liz wake up, and Holmes be the only person in the room, and she's freaking cu she's in her bra (don't get too sexy, though, keep it PG)HAve Homes ask her "What were you doing?!?"
3- Have her respond to this
a) none of your business, and have holmes begin to appreciate her smart reply
b) have her tell and justify her actions in a cool, factual manner that also gains his attention
4- Have her try to excercise, even in her state, and again, we want build up of Holmes suprise at her smarts and determiation
5- Get her out of her invalid state as quick as you can. It would suck if you just kept her in the apatment for the next few chapters
6- Have Watson clueless- he always is, and have him for comic relief
7- Keep the underplot with her and this Jason going- maybe have him follow her into Holmes' time, and develop some jealous and all that
8-Let us find out more about this "Holmes kille the women in my family thing" it's interseting
9- Dont overdo Liz' strength- five men cannot be taken down my one woman without a gun-it's physically impossible. Dont make her totally damsel in distress, but keep it real and dont go physco. Use Princess Leia as ur model- she was captured, and held still by several men, or even one, but she could shoot a gun like nobody's business
10- FINISH IT!

You need to finish this. This is amazing. However, I have one problem with it. Women are not as strong as men. Why do you think 100% of rapes are commited by men? They are physically stronger. Now, I'm saying we are delicate violets, ready to faint at anything (Elizabeth would have fainted earlier) like Christine does in Phantom of the Opera.
But, they are are stonger.
This is really good, however, and I can see Holmes fall for her. you must finish, or I will send zombies after you...(just kidding)

Um...I hate to say this, but...The Mary Sue bells in my head are going off full-blast.

Yay, i luv it write more!

Very good story. I must applaud you. You are a very good writer.

"A confident CIA agent from the year 30 there's just one problem she hates Sherlock Holmes."

Well the beginning was ok and I was very interested, but then you started overdoing it.

took Five men down? All by herself? Drunken men? Well good for her.

It's disturbing... But the plot is nice even if it's hard to follow.

when wiil you update??

Please continue, I wanna know what happens next!

DAMN!! Liz is kicking Holmes **!! Whoo! GURLS RULE!

Continue continue! XD

An interesting plotline. :D Please do continue. I really want to see how this turns out.

Not a bad start. You need to clean up the first two chapters a bit, they read a little on the repetative side. And give a thought to spreading scenes out a bit, it might reverse the rushed feeling in some places.
Miss Elizabeth reads as Inspector Beth Lestrade, of course, I presume that's who you meant her to be. The dialogue is nicely done, too. Keep at it.

~Anna MacAlister