 BloodDiamondX 2009-08-15 . chapter 1lol you must write more! i luved the part where rei told kai to run around screaming IM A GIRL! i laughed my head off at tht! great job! i hope you write another chapter! =) |
 Aliasdefeat 2007-09-16 . chapter 9 You need to writes more! I just got to 9 ¬¬ -grumbles-
Now for your review.
Ah yes, isn't Kai the sweetest trying to avoid his own feelings. This truth and dare game must be really taxing his 'I'm-too-cool-to-smile-except-like-once-in-a-series-smile-with-occasional-smirking-for-benefit-of-little-kittens-being-maltreated'
I swear that's his past time. Charity for maltreatetd kittens.
Moving on.
You should appear more often in it, you were quite fun in the first chapter. Random. But fun. And you might get to kiss kai (again) or maybe Rei?
Tala-tyson-date kinda story was brilliant. The way they were snapping at eachother in the swan-boats, trying to overhear robert and Tyson. Priceless. Kai and Tyson are made for eachother in my opinion. But Tala is still funny. As for Robert. He was extremely well-timed.
~Aliasdefeat
Ps: I do have an acc. on here, but will I ever log on? Not until my stories are complete T_T
Pss: Can you e-mail me when a new chapter comes up? Pretty please? |
 mist of 4 2007-07-29 . chapter 9haha...okay okay , i admit it. that was hilarious but sweet as well. mhm...possessive kai and oblivious tyson. its good story. u should continue. |
 n-zelda-n 2007-04-09 . chapter 9Hiya there! I've already put this story as my fav so I decided to post a review when I read it for a second time and didn't stop laughing myself almost to death XD :P
Anyway this is a super great Truth or Dare story i've read in a while! I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter :) Too bad that the Bladebreakers doesn't exist in our real world, that would make a real laugh to see that :P (I think)
Your story gave me an idea to make me a Truth or Dare story. Only I don't know if i'll ever post it XD Méh.
Hope that the next one is soon! Keep up the good work! |
 Sakura-Moonlight 2006-06-04 . chapter 9This story is funny! Keep it up |
 shadowwolf0379 2006-03-26 . chapter 60iuy0pguh |
 Noelani 2006-01-14 . chapter 9Hilariously awesome story of truth and dare. I was laughing the whole way though. It's been awhile since I've read a good funny story, so thanks for the laughs. ^_^ |
 kataiookami 2005-11-21 . chapter 4this is realy funny! |
 ANGEL CAT RENA. 2005-11-14 . chapter 9 THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ IT IS SO GOOD I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE CHAPTERS AND CAN YOU PLEASE MAKE THEM LONGER YOU ARE A GREAT STORY WRITER AND I HOPE I CAN READ MORE OF YOUR STORIES ONCE AGAIN PLEAS! WRITE MORE CHAPTERS. FROM ANGEL CAT RENA. |
 FlowerAssassin 2005-11-09 . chapter 9LOL! This story gave me alot of laughs...
Please continue! And have another dare, one with more kissing. Lots more ^^ Lots of KaixTyson! |
 loveyaray.00 2005-10-30 . chapter 1 *Still laughing like crazy* Oh my god! *Luaghs still* That was...*STILL LAUGHING* Awsome! *Gasps* I..just...can't..stop..luaghing. *Stops luahging*O.o well that was ironic. When Kai ran down the street i just started whaling with laughter! |
 Akari Kaiku 2005-10-22 . chapter 9update now!! |
 FireballAmi 2005-10-16 . chapter 9That was great! All nine chapters were worth reading and I can't wait for chapter 10! I laughed, felt bad (epecially Max's mall dare!), and just enjoyed it immensely! I loved the chapter with Tyson's date with Tala, and Kai and Tala wouldn't stop fighting. That was such a great chapter! I don't know if you're stuck on ideas for chapter 10, but here are a few suggestions:
(1) Truth or Dare alone: Continue the game, but it leads to well you know- TyKa ness.
(2) Watching TV, Tyson tries to take away controller and Kai won't give it up. Tyson sits on Kai (who is hiding his blushing). When Tyson refuses to get off until the controller is in his hand, he bends his face close to Kai and Kai can't help but to just kiss him.
OR
(3) Watching TV, Tyson tries to take away controller and Kai won't give it up. Tyson sits on Kai (who is hiding his blushing). When Kai still refuses to give it up, Tyson bends his face close to Kai and kisses him; surprising the two-toned blader who gives up the controller. Tyson is happy about winning the controller but Kai wants doesn't want the kissing to end there...
Well just some ideas. I hope that this story is updated soon! I'll be back after the next chapter is posted! |
 Fox Loves Shinigami 2005-10-01 . chapter 9OMG LOLOLOLOL OMFG that was so funny u kno im not a fan of tyson & Kai parings at all bit i have to say i loved this one. |
 Ikumak 2005-09-12 . chapter 9This... -points to fiction- is the BEST none one-shot Beyblade fiction I've ever read. I adore it! I don't know if it's just me but I actually find them in character (well aside from the Rei and Max thing but meh). I love it, I love it, I love it, and I love it... Oh, did I mention that I loved it? I hope the update will be soon and I'll be waiting. Have an awesome day! |