Nice one.Great writing.Bren and Shal are the best!

-A
http://w.writersgarret.

i like it - it has a funny plot, but you kind of changed tacs halfway thru - first it was all serious than you changed ur mind or sumthin and made it funny. but i liked it anyway

Great job, everything was great and really funy. Hope you consider writing more Brennan and Shalimar.
Merry Christmas! Bren and Shal forever!!

Nicely written, cute and funny ... great job. I'd like to read more Bren/Shal from you.

That was cute, I liked it.

This is so cute! Please write more!

This is really funny and great, keep writing!

Love it, excellent! Very sweet and funny, good job :-) Don't stop writing.

Argh, it looks like some of the punctuation got messed up again! But regardless, I love this story! I laugh everytime I read it, I can just picture it all in my head! Poor Shal! :) Great idea, great story, great job!!

AH (one more time) AH *lol* Nic I LOVED! Really did! Laughed so hard! Ow plz don't take to long to post a next chapter!

kool, i luv s/b stories!