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SkywardShadow
2009-01-31 . chapter 1
That was so bittersweet and adorable. Nice work. ^^
mylifehaslostdirection
2007-08-24 . chapter 1
no, i really liked it, my brain didn't get smashed into confusion. :)
MEL
2007-07-25 . chapter 1
Wow. That was an amazing story. I mean that was wicked good.
Moth Gypsy
2007-01-01 . chapter 1
This fic is mad skillz, seriously XD I really liked, the parallel between the itasasu and itanaru is so much fun to read and you portrayed it smashingly :D 10/10
blisblop
2006-12-10 . chapter 1
Love it
Insomniac Owl
2006-08-09 . chapter 1
Wow... it's... I'm speechless. HOnestly. I love it. I'm like.. dead because of it. In a good way of course.
arsg66
2006-06-24 . chapter 1
...*melts into a puddle after reading*
kusuri
2006-04-25 . chapter 1
This piece is...beautiful.It brought tears to my eyes.I really love.I can't really find the right words to describe your fic.Its awesome.
Tessa Marlene
2006-01-23 . chapter 1
Beautiful and sweet. A perfect characterization for Sasuke. He's cute with Naruto *and* Itachi. *cuddles little Sasu-chan*
Flayne
2005-11-19 . chapter 1
Ah...My head doesn't hurt, but my heart aches. *sniff*

IloveitIloveitIloveitIloveit~!!

Call me a masochist but the Angst was just so beautifully written and I enjoyed it very much. I really like the way you portrayed Sasuke's Character and the flashbacks...oh God...*incoherent-babbling*

Hope you keep writing forever more! ^.~
Shinigami Rachi
2005-10-03 . chapter 1
it's cute *smile*
foscari
2005-09-09 . chapter 1
Woow... just wow.

Terribly touching in all places and beautiful. It was written simply but carried with it a lot of depth and emotions. Didn't make my brain hurt at all but it did make my heart ache a little.
Fantastical Queen Ebony Black
2005-07-17 . chapter 1
I loved it. The flashbacks were very cute and effective... I really liked the 'no one will look for me' bit.
Blisblop
2005-06-23 . chapter 1
This is one of my favs,greatest use of forshadowing. "because Sasuke is Sasuke".the best reason after all.
Dead Butterfly
2005-06-08 . chapter 1
aw..i almost died...this is one of my favorits:P
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