   draglord 8/21/05 . chapter 5Prety good story |
| falcon crest 8/6/05 . chapter 5 I'll add an ending:
And K ratos broke the computer
HAPPY ENDING |
| gghgg 7/27/05 . chapter 5 hehehehe verry stupid and funny |
| Kristen Mori 4/24/05 . chapter 5 Pleasse write a sequal to that! it is So funny. Does Kratos really remind you af a grasshopper. Write more! Pleasse |
| luciado 4/20/05 . chapter 5 singing: HAVE A VERY MESSED UP X-MAS
IT'S THE SYMPHONIANESS TIME OF THE YEAR!
I SAY PIE EQUALS
A SYMPHONIA SEQUAL
HOORAH! LET'S HAVE SOME BEER!
HAVE A VERY MESSED UP X-MAS!
I'M ACCTUALLY UNDER-AGE!
MY MOM JUST CAME IN
AND TOOK MY GIN
AT LEAST I STILL HAVE MY HOME PAGE!
awesome huh? |
| Piro the Renagade writer 12/22/04 . chapter 5 there are 2 words for this chap: screwed(1) up(2) |
| Electric Eclectic 12/22/04 . chapter 5 This is to review the missing 4th chapter.
The great Christmas cookie war 1.
(Hears Genis singing)
Me:SHUT UP!(knocks him out with a hard cookie)
Genis:(Knocked out)
Zelos:(high fives me)You are awesome!
Me:Damn straight I'm awesome!(i just cussed!)
Lloyd:I was killed in the war.(cries)
Me:Stop whining!(gets a whip)Genki,can I punish them?
Lloyd,Genis,Zelos:Uh oh.HIDE!
Me:Sheena and Raine,a little assisstance?
Sheena and Raine:(evil grins)Sure.
This was hilarious!
5 out of 5! |
| Katraa 12/21/04 . chapter 2 BRILLIANT! SHEER BRILLIANCE! |
| this account is now unactive 12/21/04 . chapter 5 -cracks up again- I reread it, it's even funnier than before... |
| Cerse Liminara 12/21/04 . chapter 5 You are psycho!
Skeith: Truly.
But, 'twas funnie, soh doan't shtop writeeng! |
| Fuuunnnaaayyy 12/21/04 . chapter 4 Yhesh... I liked it how ruined then dramatic parts... Yeah, I'm an insanity fan too. My fav part when you made your power make Kratos OOC!_ |
| this account is now unactive 12/20/04 . chapter 4 -cracks up- That was funny! Rainegal... -cracks up again- Would you happen to be talking about A Walk to Remember? Just wondering. |
| Electric Eclectic 12/20/04 . chapter 4 Okayy That was weird,but good.
Kratos:I had pull her away.That felt good.
Me:Right.Hey I wanna join the pizza party!
Regal:Who are you?
Me:I'm um,Incognito.
Regal:So your're nobody then?
Me:Yep.
Zelos:Nah.He's my yaoi buddeh!(glomps me)
Me:Thankies!
Regal:O_O I think I'll leave.
Me:You should.(starts making out with Zelos)
Regal:(Throws up all over everyone,including Genki)
5 out of 5! |
| Electric Eclectic 12/20/04 . chapter 3 Wow.That was tearful.
Colette:I know.(leaking tears)
Sheena:Mhmm.(leaking more tears)
Zelos:Yep hunnys.(leaking even more tears)
Sheena:STUPID CHOSEN!(smacks him into a wall)
Zelos:Why me?
Sheena:WHY! I'LL TELL YOU WHY! YOU ARE A LECHEROUS CHOSEN WHO CAN"T KEEP HIS MOUTH SHUT!
Me:Um,Genki! We need to use a tranquilizer gun!
5 out of 5! |
| Electric Eclectic 12/20/04 . chapter 2 Hilarious!
Lloyd and Zelos:We did not find it funny!
Sheena:But I did!(chucks more snowballs)
Zelos:OW!(drops)I give up!
Lloyd:Ow!(falls)Me too!
Me:Dog pile on those 2!
5 out of 5! |
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