Hey in the sentance He tried. Flustered, he tried to question him You need to take out He tried. So that is is further protest. Flustered, he tried to question him, Sorry but I personally have a HUGE problem with spelling and gramical errors as I am sure many others do. Just thought i'd let you know

I do like this. It's a fairly subtle moment, clearly described. Your language flows well, and you put in plenty of little details that make the scene more vivid: the veiled stars, the way E's sobs stop, and the heat/cold contrast.

THIS STORY IS THE SNAZZ.

Add! Add! Please? There aren't enough Glor/Ecth fics out there...

Hi, i really suck at reviewing but i just wanted to say how much i loved it! please do add to it- and as soon as you can!