That's the end?
But what HAPPENED?

Hi there.. you seem gifted and write well. i was wondering if you could please write an angsty steamy romance between Norman Osborne (Green Gobin) And K\MJ? :)

Thanks!!

Damnit Silver! I hate filling in the blanks!! (I hope Otto AND Peter dies along with Harry) xD

Gab: *hits her. HARD.*

OW... >

What the? I thought I reviewed this chapter already! (is confused) Well, you're a great writer and this is a great fic! Brilliant ending, the Peter spirit thing was so sad and sweet. This is one of the few Otto fics I've bothered to read, I like the way you write him and yes I really want a sequel! :D Keep up the good work!

You picked a heckuva place to end this, you know that? I'm just going to assume that Gobbie's butt gets kicked, and Otto and Peter can get on with their lives. Yeah.

Wow! Okay, so that was a shocker. Peter isn't dead- although, if they buried him, he should have sufficated...but that doesn't really matter. Yay! Everything will be okay. Although I do want to see what the Goblin and the Octopus say when they see the Spider alive... Great story!

AH, man This was A good Story!! Aw, c'mon, what happens to Otto?

Nonetheless, this was on a scale of 1 to Awesome; Totally cool ^_^

AH! YAY! PETER ALIVE!

Yes more then likely a typo. This is why I should do spell check before posting a review. Now I remember why. I'm so sad that this is over. I all ways happy to see a new chapter up for it. I do hope that you will write other Spider-Man Fan Fictions in the future. Wonderful ending.

ALIVE! J-E-L-L-O IT'S ALIVE! heh sorry, am i the only one who misses those commericals? hehe but oh man AWESOME story! loved how you put Kraven in there :)

This is an interesting story! I'm looking forward to the next - and final - chapter.

And 'Getting Away With Murder' was a good song choice for this; I love that song, and I was wondering if anyone would end up using it in a fic!

Mary Jane seriously needs to move to a safer city; she seems to be a magnet for trouble...

I was going to wait until I read the entire fic to comment, but I had to say something quick before I forgot. I like the fact that Otto killed him with his flesh-and-blood hands, not his tentacles. It makes the act seem a bit more, I dunno, monstrous, because this wasn't something the tentacles did.

That didn't come out right... Hope you got the gist of what I was saying...

War: You must finish this story, I love it;

Wowza. Very intersting chapter. Both of them almost-villians, both trying to protect MJ- cool! Hope they can sort things out though. What's gonna happen? (And what were the actuators saying to MJ? :-)
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