this is going pretty well. it keeps me entertained and wondering what is going to happen next. i was wondering if you are going to update it since you havnt in a while. pleace let me know

are you going to finish this? Please tell me you are- this is to good to stop. I know it's been a long while but please try to update!

Now a cliffhanger I can deal with, but it's really evil to just quit a story that. I really, really want to know what happens!

aw man..what the hell. have to know whats going to happen. please update.

wow this has caught my intrest, let me just point out that if you want more bulling towards the tmnt then make the spanish villians threaten them with violence not just verble abuse.

Like the fic though, i'll be soaring the skies to see if it has been updated in the near future.

gah...[stares at screen; shocked that there's not much more]

wow! that was very- no- REALLY GREAT FANTASTIC! looks like you haven't updated in a while though- can you update again soon though? please? this story of yours certenly has a nice ring to it!

wow, geez, that would suck, big time! great job on the story! can't wait for more, update soon!

great story very original

but i have to tell you some of the thing you wrote in spanish doent make sence im fro puerto rico and i speak spanish so if you need help with something let me know my email is

aw cool story i like it

If someone is really curious as to the Spanish they can scoot on over to Altavista's bablefish site. You can search it from just about anywhere and it will pop up. Select Spanish to English, put in the sentence and click translate. Actually it's usually a horrible translation, but you get the gist of the sentence.

I think it's actually 'darse prisa' and 'Dios mio'.

I want to hurt the jerks! Laughing at the tied up turtles as they try to eat and drink. Stupid jerks! I'm not supposed to like them am I?

AH! They're unconscious again! Oh poor guys! And Francisco seems cool! Great chapter!

Cheers,

pacphys

Ok, this is a little one, but if Carlos is the speaker's buddy he would probably use the informal you, "estabas correcto, Carlos."

Aw the poor turtles don't understand them! :'( Poor Guys.

I think it would be funny if they switched bandanas sometime! hehe.

Wow, Really well written and a wonderful story so far!

Cheers,

pacphys

What can I say? You've still got me interested so that's a good thing. I hope you don't mind my saying/asking/pointing out or whatever you may dub it as but it would seem as though you and papychs are on the same wavelength with the turtles being taken away to some strange new environment plot. Please don't misinterpret or misunderstand me but I noticed that a while ago but there are striking differences and your story still rocks don't get me wrong! I'm still a loyal fan of your writing, it's just I was afraid that I'd offend you if I mentioned it. I probably did so I apologize in advance if I have done so. I love the whole "poisonious saliva" thing and very interesting with how the turtles ate and drank their food/drinks. Keep up the good work and once again, I'm truly sorry if I somehow managed to offend you Mickis.

Hey there! (waves) I'm not gone, and neither is anybody else!

Oh, I see. I really don't understand much Spanish, so I can relate to Don's small incedent. Great job on this chapter, all though the tranqs are positively getting on my nerves...hm, maybe I should have Rijinn bite the *#$& guns in half...(smiles evilly) I think I wil! (sneaks away to find Rijinn)

The crazed reader,

Lunar-ninja

Aw...the poor guys...and those new prisoners too! What are those guys really up to, I wonder. There certainly must be a greater purpose these guys are all working for...I hate suspense... lol.

Kudos to the guys for being so resourceful when it came to the food. And Francisco seems like a cool guy.

Can't wait for the next update! Keep goin'.

fallen hikari _

Wow, ask and ye shall receive! What a funny coincidence that I wrote my last review just about an hour ago...

Ice cream? I'd love some! The shipping might cost you an arm and a leg though...

Again, fabulous entry. This is a great story line, wish I thought of it! It just keeps getting better.

I agree about not translating - it adds to the suspense not knowing what they're saying, as well as authenticity.

Phinehas is intriguing, as I'm sure some of your other new OC's will be! Question though, how do you pronounce his name? I had trouble saying it in my head as I read...is it like Fin-e-us? Or am I way off base?

Huh, funny of raph to accuse someone of seeing the glass half empty!

Poor Raphie getting in the jugular! I think its worth it to him though, knowing that he pisses them off!

THANKS FOR A GREAT CHAPTER! In the words of Ronald McDonald, "I'm LUVIN it!

*one more PS, being the helpless review groveler that I am, I'd be honored if you checked out Unlikely Savior - I think you'd enjoy the humor of it.

SassyB