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littlematchgirl
2004-07-29
ch 1,
abuseI liked it, Nabiki is one of my favorite characters... i think this was cool, you should continue to write more ^^
dogbertcarroll
2003-10-05
ch 1,
abuseI like it. It seems well reasoned and expressed.
diskincluded
2003-01-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseYeah, that was good. I've only seen the first two tv episodes and the movie of Ranma 1/2, and I enjoyed those. I can't quite explain it, but this fic just feels right.
lija
2001-02-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseHmmm...an interesting point of view of Nabiki's character. It could be true....
Jenaque
2001-02-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was really, really good! And I know what you mean with the strong Midwestern accent! My pronunciation is horrible too!
Moryath
2001-02-26
ch 1,
abuseNice portrayal of Nabiki, lets the reader get into one of her possible mindsets. Could do with a little more exposition, but it stands on its own well enough even when the reader hasn't read that particular manga.
Saggit
2001-02-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like the structure, the content, the grammar--it was all in-character, except possibly for some of the terms of expression; I question whether Nibiki would ever think, "I guess I can accept that I'm manipulative." She'd either revel in it, or deny it, or shrug off the matter as unimportant. But for the most part, this is a nice character piece. Could have used a bit more mood, along with the introspective narrative. Just to give it color. But very nice.
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