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| littlematchgirl 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abuseI liked it, Nabiki is one of my favorite characters... i think this was cool, you should continue to write more ^^ |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It seems well reasoned and expressed. |
| diskincluded 2003-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseYeah, that was good. I've only seen the first two tv episodes and the movie of Ranma 1/2, and I enjoyed those. I can't quite explain it, but this fic just feels right. |
| lija 2001-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseHmmm...an interesting point of view of Nabiki's character. It could be true.... |
| Jenaque 2001-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really, really good! And I know what you mean with the strong Midwestern accent! My pronunciation is horrible too! |
| Moryath 2001-02-26 ch 1, | abuseNice portrayal of Nabiki, lets the reader get into one of her possible mindsets. Could do with a little more exposition, but it stands on its own well enough even when the reader hasn't read that particular manga. |
| Saggit 2001-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like the structure, the content, the grammar--it was all in-character, except possibly for some of the terms of expression; I question whether Nibiki would ever think, "I guess I can accept that I'm manipulative." She'd either revel in it, or deny it, or shrug off the matter as unimportant. But for the most part, this is a nice character piece. Could have used a bit more mood, along with the introspective narrative. Just to give it color. But very nice. |