This chapter...*grunts*

Posting the epic would make me feel better. :p

Oh, you hit the dynamic between the two women so nicely. I'm not sure who would win in that battle of wills, although I think you answered that question. Would you look at my story too?

This is great, thanks so much!
Please, keep it up!

Shall we call you the Mistress of Angst now?

Oh...Poor Elaida. And poor Morgase. Damn that Gaebril!! We didn't even get sex! Oh well..I like it, Elaida being all protective. heh. Good job, Laura, and dedicating it to me! ~giggles~

oh, damnit Laura! You better not end it there! But I do like Eirana's little apperance. I really love her. heh.

But yes. Very good. But keep going! :p

Lovely, no explicit sex and canon too...

...so I have to say that I liked it a lot.

Aw... so sweet...

No! It can't end here... It can't! Please, this is too sad. *sniff-sniff-sigh*
very well written, keep it up and keep updating!
I love this.
Alyssa
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Aw! That's so sad! Well, not so sad, but sad enough! I truely feel sorry for Elaida. I bet they could have each other in totally secrecy! They can! They have to! @_@;

I loved it! The end was so tender and Elaida was so caring...very well done.

~Jer

ELAIDA?!?!
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ELAIDA?!?!?!
...Still, quite neat, and well-written. Thumbs up!

Vulnerable Elaida? That's a rare one, all right! I'm glad to read something original, and even gladder that it was more sweet than sensual. I do not believe that anything like this happened in canon; though Elaida was advisor to Morgase for many years, we know little of their relationship. I'm pleased to read something about it.

This is very good. I loved the following line:
"Cats," she said simply, "and i'll place a ward."
Very few people bring Elaida out as something other than... Well, Elaida asurper Amyrlin ect.
Just a little thing, i think you should put the rating up a bit - some of the material is a bit explicit for PG.
Eitherway, take care!
Alyssa
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oh, wow! No sex! They seemed to want it...but nope! I hope you're writing a sequal to this!! ;)