you're right, it is a bit weird, but at the same time deep and a good look into the character's personalities. kudos to you!

Very interesting read. I was saddened by it, but I loved how it was written. Very poetic.

VAGUE is SUPER COOL. The tense changes make me think of E. E. Cummings, especially things like this line:

And someplace after infinity’s end she finds him and murmured her deepest love and gratitude and will wish her insanity never is.

It works very well, especially since you're dealing with the POV of someone who is mentally not quite right. I think it's really too bad that the drabbles/very short fics get almost zero feedback when there's stuff like this about, very EXCELLENT stuff. Love for this fic and for the changing tenses.

Weird indeed - but powerful. I hope that you write more of this pairing!

Whoa... your stuff is so good. I loved the tense changing. Wow.

Whoa...0-0 This is very, very good! I can't really describe it. Very impacting.

Ahh!! So. Confusing.

Yay!!

I enjoyed that very much. I am only wondering if Kagome had only one husband and it all is repititive, or if she had two, and the first one died, so she went to go kill herself. And she did she have children, or did she not?

Either way, I loved it. All these questions, make me like it even more. I did get the gist of it, so I am happy. Your very talented, and I envy your word usage. I can't wait to see more from you.

nice ficcie. I'm learning to like Miroku X Kagome even if i do despize kagome... but all in all- nice fic. you've got talent ^_^ *hands you a cookie* this is going on my favs ^_^

I think its very well written and pretty good I like the way you wrote this story