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| allison reeve 2008-07-20 ch 10,  | abusei think ten years with flash backs would be really great and i have to say this story is just screaming for a sequel. i love it by the way. |
| Polkadot-Sunstar 2008-04-30 ch 10, | abuseAw, I really liked this! James and Lucius were adorably cuutee. (: Good job! -Amy :D |
| yumie-darkness123 2008-03-17 ch 10, | abusethat was fabu story. did you ever write a sequel? |
| Ladyroo88 2008-01-29 ch 10, | abuseI love it! that was soo cute! I think three years and they should be getting married. |
| STEPHiE 2007-10-25 ch 10, anon. | abuseI absoulutley loved this story. I felt so sorry for James at first but then he found love. I wanna see a sequel please... |
| FOXANBU 2007-07-15 ch 10, | abusegood final chapter!! i would like to see james pregnant with lucius' child in the sequel. ( im addicted to mpreg) ^-~ foxanbu |
| Slate Grey 2007-06-07 ch 10, | abuseAw, what a great story. I don't really see it as a happy ending romance, since you made it pretty clear that Lucius isn't going to be either faithful or a second father to Harry, but I'm exceptionally fond of James and the wonderful way he overcomes all of his problems. Beautifully done. *loves* |
| Tsuir 2007-04-19 ch 9, anon. | abusePerhaps someone pointed this out before but in the first few chapters you call James's father Edward and then from the 8th on Michael. Just a note. |
| Shadow of a Shadow 2007-04-14 ch 10, | abuseIf you write a sequel will Draco be in it? |
| Potter's Wifey 2007-01-08 ch 10, | abuseI absolutely love it. I would like the sequel to be 10 years in the future. |
| CelticHeiressFiona 2006-12-16 ch 10, | abuseAw! Awesome fic! They are so cute together! I love it! I'll be checking out your other stories so get used to seeing me a bit. =] |
| yaeko 2006-05-28 ch 10, | abuseoww! icarus this was great!! well i mean poor james, but it was really great to see him and lucius together, i just have one question, did lucius became a death eater? |
| Kay05 2006-03-11 ch 5, | abuseAmazing story...Please when you have chande right a seuel |
| KatanaKira 2006-03-07 ch 10, | abuseFinally someone who aknowledges the age difference between Lucius and James! It was an amazing story. Really it was. Bringing a new light to the whole L/J slash that is not common in our world. ^-^ You are a great writer |
| Grammar Nut 2006-02-16 ch 10, anon. | abuse“Maybe he would, but I don’t want him too." “But you were going too…” You've been making some to/too mistakes. In fact, your issues are the opposite of most people's. Most folks say, "You like ice cream, and I like it to." But you'd say "I'll do whatever I want too." PBS has a good grammar section, and it's online too. I think just googling 'English grammar' gets you the link somewhere down the line. I wanted to tell you that I've had a lovely time reading and grammar-checking your fic. Actually, the grammar was almost as fun as the story. That's not an insult to your writing so much as a compliment to your flaws. (that sounds weird, but... yeah) I really like the idea of Harry meeting Neville, who'd definitely end up as being TBWL without the canon Harry to get chosen. Would they be friends? Would James die anyways in the war? How would James and Lucius fare, especially since as a spy who doesn't know Occlumency, Lucius is totally fucked. Your reader, Livi C. |