Neat! And it's true, those things do come out of others often, and sometimes out of us as well. God always forgives us though... thankfully hehe.

This is such a beautiful poem. I'm not religious at all, but this just had something about it... I hope things get better for you, I'm having hard times, too, but reading stuff like this makes me feel a lot better! I hope to read more from you-- I'm terrible at poetry, but it's nice to read.
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Absolute genius! You're an absolute genius! And I know just how you feel. Friends will always let you down, but God's always there to lean on!

i thought it was good. i could feel it as i was reading, and i'm in agreement with your sentiments, if that's makes sense to you... keep it up

Wow! I feel just exactly like this! What a great poem!

interesting. i really get what you say about all the blasphemy. it faces us every place we go, it seems, in this day and age. just remember, you're not the only one dealing with this, or feeling this way, even though it seems like it sometimes, i'm sure. great work. keep writing!

That was pretty good! I could understand where you're coming from... Nice job.