Wow! I really like this! I hope you are going to continue!

Whoa...Coincidences?

Cool! Nice plot... You mean "Jane" have to finish the whole experience before she can go back? Will take a long time unless no time pased at all... Anyway, update soon! Pretty please?

whats making the noise?is it bad or good?thats a cliffy!i hate them,anyway great chapter love ur story,cant wait intill next chapter!^_^

First off: I like how she talks as if she's lived there her whole life and I can picture her accent perfectly! Um ... maybe she can run away with "Ollie" and stuff. Maybe she cn become a cow girl and stuff ... there! HA! A SUGGESTION! Please update soon! :)

Your Lord and Master,
~*Gurschwick*~

Oh, I'm so glad you updated! I think it would be really cool if you made Hermione meet the twins of the past life! I would enjoy seeing how they acted! And who is the sherriff?

that old granger bat, gr!! i wander what did wake hermione up? eh? please update soon 'coz this is great!!

olli wood lol this is Jessica-McConell keep wriitng

*Grins* I'm really liking this! Please update soon!

Well, I wasn't expecting him to be her savior! Will Hermione meet Fred and George of the Wild West? Will she find Harry and Ron? Whose the sherriff...oh so many questions to be asked, please continue soon!

This isn't a bad fic, but I do have one tip for you. Instead of writing in the third person present tense, try the third person past tense. Rowling's "Harry Potter" series is written in this tense and it's the general writing style for most fiction.

For example, one line of your story reads as follows:

"Hermione is curious to check why the voice is familiar to her, but doesn’t get a chance to do so."

This sentence makes more sense if written as follows:

"Hermione was curious to learn why the voice was familiar to her, but didn't have the chance to do so."

hey
better then i thought. pretty good. update soon, please.
:)

kool keep writing

We would call you an illiterate freak in my world... THIS SUCKS! o.O not really, I liked it^^

AWW! So sweet! My likie! Erm .. 10 o'clock at night ... ack ... will review later to others chapters ... dunno if that makes sense ... don't really care ...