 GinnyPotter12488 2009-04-04 . chapter 32Hello I am a brand knew writer on fanfiction. I absolutely loved your story. Is there any chance of there being a squeal? I hope to here from you and read more of your excellent work. Sorry about the misspelled words. I am not a good speller. sincerely Ginnypotter12488. |
 valondon 2009-03-31 . chapter 9Good chapter, I was saddened that Harry couldn't become an Anamagus unlike his dad, as he's shown he would've liked to become one to be more like his dad. I liked your title of the chapter, throughout reading the chapter I had Skillet's Whispers in the Dark stuck in my head (which can be annoying while trying to read btw). Once again good chapter. |
 GiGiFanFic 2008-09-21 . chapter 31Are you still writing? just wondered. I enjoyed rereading this story. It is great for a first attempt. No histrionics, and as Joe Friday would say"Just the facts maam", not dry but so poignant in parts, but unlike you, I,d never have given Petunia any credit for how Harry turned out. I know family is important, but to allow her credit when there is still no love lost between them, not me ever. |
 Beth'sOfHerBroom 2008-06-21 . chapter 32wow i loved it iv sat all day from bout 11 till 8 at night reading it all.
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 Beth'sOfHerBroom 2008-06-21 . chapter 1i liked the first chpter, i found it a little confusing, perhaps if you wrote it was your alternate to the 7th book, because i was very confused when harry was underage and back at privet drive.
ill read the rest cuz this is so coo.
x |
 q.thews 2008-06-18 . chapter 32All those Potters, Weasley (with and without Granger's genes) and Longbottoms... poor Snape :-)
The should make a new tower and house!
Ciao! |
 q.thews 2008-06-18 . chapter 30Too easy. but i was even thinking we would not see it.
Ciao! |
 q.thews 2008-06-18 . chapter 26In this story there are some good ideas about the DADA teacher, Neville and all the werewolf thing (even if it is made too easy).
Ciao! |
 q.thews 2008-06-17 . chapter 18I feel a little guilty asking this... but... when the bad things will start ?
It is all so nice :-)
Ciao! |
 q.thews 2008-06-16 . chapter 3Interesting choice, i've never read it... and it even has some logic!
Ciao! |
 q.thews 2008-06-16 . chapter 2Much better :-)
Ah a shopping second chapter... i haven't read one since some month (there was a time when evry story i read had one of them, but usually the shoppers weren't those two).
Ciao! |
 q.thews 2008-06-16 . chapter 1I hope it will be better as in the forst chapter we have a crucio blocked by a protego spell underage magic with no ministerial intervention and a semi nice Petunia...
The underage thing should/could be explained, Petunia, ok, she may have a "niceness" attack but the crucio/protego...
Ciao!
P.S.
Sorry, i don't really know why i'm so picky tonight |
 rosalinda felicie 2008-05-03 . chapter 32 loved it so much!. i actually cried when arthur weasley became the minister of the wizarding world and when remus lupin finally got his cure for his sake and harry's. thankyou so much for the dedication & passion you put into the story. P.S keep it up your awesome at it...rosie utica,ny. |
 Vyperr 2006-12-16 . chapter 32I enjoyed your story however there was one scene that was off. it refered to ginny and ron not knowing about snap making the cure but when harry and hermione set up the meeting ron and ginny were also there. |
 Inny-hakky 2006-08-04 . chapter 32This last chapter is almost too sweet, but otherwise i loved your story |