Very interesting story

Spooky :S But a very good story :) I like Frank, but how come he is alive after he died?

Well that was interesting. I am still wondering how Frank popped back to life though. At least in time to be killed for good this time. Good story and I hope you have done a sequel.

I liked how you mostly stuck with the third person limited and characterization, especially with body language. That's hard to do, but it makes really close, personal writing that reads more like a novel and less like the average fanfic. Nice work!

*cue applause* Yay! ^_^ Spiffy, spiffy story. I really enjoyed it, especially these last few chapters. We mourn the loss of Frank, but it's good to see Sheppard recovering and everyone home safe. I do wonder if you've written more, as you said "addressing the issues that happened in this story." 'Scuse me while I go find out... ^_~

"A lab rat on speed." ^_^ Oh, well said! I'm glad to see Beckett (he's always fun) and I just love how you write McKay. I can't wait to see what happens with Frank and the four hive ships, and I want to find out what killed the Wraith already!

I love Frank!

Plushies: *jealous glares*

^_^;; Moving on... I also love your writing. The characters - from Elizabeth to McKay to Frank - are all very well-written and believable. I do so enjoy reading such good stuff, so it's on to ch. 6 for me!

See? Bad stuff's happening. ^_^

Michael Plush Doll: *sniggers*

Ah, they've decided to comment. *sigh* Ah well. It really is too bad that all these Wraith have died.

Steve Plush Doll: *solemn sigh*

Hopefully their deaths will be avenged! Anyway, I'd chat more, but I -really- wanna see what happens next.

Ooh, I'm -quite- excited. ^_^ Thus far you've written the team really well (yay!) and I can't wait for the bad (read: exciting) stuff to happen. ^_~ I'm very glad QOTRS put this fic in the C2, coz it looks like a good one!

All in all ... this is probably the best written story ever--the parts with the Wraith (Frank) are utterly believable. I especially love the parts with Shepperd and the Wraith/ghost.

I hope (I know, I know ... we all can't all be happy) that you write another fanfic with a Wraith in it. You have a talent of making it so ... real. Keep it up.

QOTRS~*

Hello,

I am seriously sorry that I have not left a review for you regarding any of the wonderful stories you have written. But, I figured it was time to finally let you know how much I enjoy the stories and the style of writing you have. I believe that you are one of the first, if not the only one, where I have enjoyed EVERY story you have written. So I say CONGRATS to you and your writing. It truly is wonderful.

Keep up the great work, and I shall be looking forward to the next set of adventures!

Woah, I am quiet glad I found this fic again, I read it once then my computer decided it didn't want to save it under my favorites so i lost it...quiet unhappy about that i was:(

But i was scrouing the net and came across this one again, and i read it stright sitting, fantastic i loved it as much as i loved it the first time if not more. Great work and i hope there is some kind of sequal to this cause its just real good:D

Keep up the good work
Joulez

great story. really interesting and exciting.

great writing! I stayed up for two hours later than I was supposed to so i could finish this. i really love atlantis fics that play out like an episode. wonderful job and keep up the great work!

I've really enjoyed reading this story and all your others. I've not had an opportunity to review until now, but I definitely wanted to say how much I enjoy your work. This story in particular was chock full of excitement, character development with just the right amount of creepiness. It played like an episode, and during this dirth of new episodes in the US, it was very refreshing. Keep up the excellant work.

Susan